Reviews for Lost |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, very beautiful :) Had me a wee bit near tears with John's choice of pin for Charin :) I love how familiar they are with one another, how easy their relationship seems :) One thing though... Teyla already met Kerra in a previous chapter...? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I squeed so much reading this. I can't believe I thought you'd finished this :S So good :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad to have you back and the story. Well done as always and I like Kerra's POV of the evolving relationships between Teyla, John and Kanaan. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like John's gesture with the wings. I have to admit I want Teyla to be SuperMom and still go on missions. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice, I like the different POV. Even though I am not fond of the character, it is nice to see that Kanaan can find some happiness as well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, I was going to hound you again in your LJ to update. I'm sorry you've been feeling so blue. I'm glad you are feeling better, though. Love these two chapters. Love how you are giving Kerra life alongside Kanaan. Why was this so difficult for the writers of the show to give him life and meaning and purpose besides Teyla's babysitter... But I love this last chapter the best. To see John finally relax, to hear him and see him through your eyes how he loves his daughter, is truly moving. I love his choice of wings and your words match his voice Perfectly! Love his teasing that Charin will cry throughout the ceremony and finally, the symbols and objects chosen by Teyla and the words spoken by Halling, his blessing for Charin, Priceless! Truly beautiful, Wed. Thank you so much for this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another great chapter. I got interupted with my reading but was FINALLY able to come back. It was worth it. Great job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapters, I'm guessing the story is coming to a close. I will say I'm not entirely fond of the idea of Sheppard just taking more administrative duties, but I guess it has to happen eventually. |
![]() ![]() ![]() such a nice cerimony wonder if kerra got to see it ? :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woo Hoo! It's back! ANother great chapter! And... here's ANOTHER one to read. YEAH! |
![]() ![]() ![]() of course especialy for kanaan kerra is totaly in love with him and im sure he is in love with her now its just time to get them to admit it like john and teyla did :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh I love the happiness. Thankyou so much for updating. I wondered what had happened. Lovely 2 chapters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter. John's nervousness was cute. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter. |