What a wonderfully epic story. I'm so glad I read it once it was fully completed because, as another reviewer mentioned, it was just like reading a novel and I couldn't put it down.

I think I'll be waiting until stories are complete now before I read them. You don't lose the pace of the story and can get your teeth into the adventure and relationships between the characters better.

It was tense, dangerous, thrilling, sexy, romantic, heartbreaking, funny and so much more.

What else could you ask for...apart from more stories...I'm greedy I know.

I shall be working my way through the longer fictions you have penned and I can't wait.

Thanks for all the hard work.

I dont know what to say accept wonderful story..as usual..just like reading a novel...couldnt put it down till i finished and then sad it ahd to finish,...
just want to say thanks for all the great stoires of yours I have read...
youare a very creative writer and very talented..
thanks so much
could you tell me any other writers who write J/T stories..
I am addicted now...
hugs

I might get in trouble for saying this, but I don't like Kanaan and I don't like the idea of Teyla having a child. I know Rachel was pregnant so they worked that into the story, but I believe it killed the John/Teyla arch. Teyla was supposed to be with John, have his child, get married ect, ect.

A very beautiful and achingly raw chapter.

Your lovely story was discovered by me at exactly the right time! I have been getting into Lost lately (as in the other TV show with the other Sheppard.) I was in the mood for an epic fic, with a M rating, of course Sheyla, and I wanted them to be stranded somewhere. I was looking through the Lost fics for something like that with either Jack/Sun or Jack/Juliet but there was nothing there. So I thought I would try my luck here in my other fandom and low and behold I find a Sheyla fic called Lost! and so far I really like it! Of to read more :-)

Aw, I loved this story so much. You're an amazing writer and this was simply a pleasure to read. I'm glad that everybody got a happy ending.

I just read this over three days and loved it a ridiculous amount - seriously, it was incredible. So... epic! I fell asleep yesterday reading it, and it was just at the part where the Hunters were attacking the camp and they were trapped in the upper levels preparing to go into the air vents, and I dreamt about it; I dreamt that someone stole Charin when Teyla wasn't looking (it was the woman they'd traded with, who Teyla got the sword from) and it was really UPSETTING. John and Teyla were running around trying to find her and people were dying and... then I woke up. LOL!

Anyway, yeah, LOVED it.

Loved it!

this was absolutely fantastic. i loved the whole thing, from john and teyla stranded on the planet and their developing relationship to charin and the rest.

Squee! Best. Story. Ever! I don't normally go in for this ship, but this fic was awesome! You're style was really easy to follow and totally addictive... An all-around great fic.

so touching! reminds me of the first time i meet my newborn brother. i'm rereading this actually its a great fic.

I loved this story. Well thought out and it flows well. I loved the way Teyla and John finally got together and John's fears once they were back in Atlantis. Your descriptions of life on that other world were brilliant and I found it easy to picture what was happening. All in all a brilliant story and one I thoroughly enjoyed reading.

this was a great story and I look forward to any of your future stories.

WoW! I really loved this! Once I found it I couldn't stop reading :) I hope you can do a continuation or another story with the same character set-up..64 chapters just wasn't enough! lol

Thanks for the great read!

Best Wishes

Wiz

Ah, there first fight as a couple...love the way they worked it out. Thanks.