Reviews for A Very Good Bus Ride
Guest chapter 1 . 8/11/2015
Toast chapter 1 . 7/5/2015
Fucking love it! This stupid story is so hot it's fucking annoying. (xD) But it is really hot. Thanks. So glad i found it **
hikora chapter 1 . 3/2/2014
Well, Sasuke is pissed alright, and Naruto is darn horny. Nice.
rizeru-chan chapter 1 . 1/10/2014
that was a hot lemon...
Guest chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
why does sasuke keep saying fucking all the time
Treasure Family chapter 1 . 7/12/2011
I love it. Great job.
engiengi chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
omfg! So effin awsum!3
pathetic smelly chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
deadbiday chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
Fucking awesome... Yes. Lame pun intended.

Loved it...and I just noticed you're never going to get this cuz it's over a year old...wonderful.
TenshiXXX chapter 1 . 12/21/2009
I'm ill, so I feel shitty at the moment. But this fic made me feel better :)
Sesshysgirl06 chapter 1 . 9/26/2009
Haha...this reminds me of my friend that i used to have. i caught him having sex with the 'new girl' in the back seat. me being the curious one that i am turned round when i started to hear groaning in the back seat of the bus. there they were having sex with tons of people on it! i was so embarrassed to look at him for hour! haha! great story! i loved it!
No Name 7429035 chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
Good. :D The only crit I have to give is you use the word fuck too much. :S P#ssed or not, a lot of those were unnecessary and no one has the right to say it that many times. Also, over 100 degrees, that would give them strokes. XD Not healthy at all, the majority would have been really, REALLY sick, if not all. Hell,I get sick when it's just 80 degrees.


yaoirulz especially sasUKE chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
lol. That was nice _ Nothing better than hot one shots :D
sesshy's numba1 gurl chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
omg! you review my stories all the time and when i read this i never knew you wrote it haha thats crazy! anyway it was awesome and totally hot go sasUKE _ and thanks for all your support!
LivingLies chapter 1 . 5/4/2009
hahahahaha that was awesome!

loved the ending
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