Reviews for What I Am
Child of Apollo-Athena chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
Starrynytex chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
So...animalistic. And I rather like it. It is sad though.
Ashley Gordon chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
Wow. I can't think of another word for it.

Great imagery. Great pace.

"Broken white lily." Poor edward.

Good job!
Stefy101 chapter 1 . 3/28/2009
that was really good. Its kind of a suckish way to describe your story, I know and Im sorry for that. But I am speechless. That was really well written, really well thaught out and it really paidoff

Congrates it was awesome,

PennyOfTheWild chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
*utterly speechless at the power and pure poeticness of this oneshot*

Hauntingly beautiful.
istarmyway chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
loving it loving you
were-vampgirl chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
oh my gosh! i can't even breath. great job.
orangemice311 chapter 1 . 2/26/2009
Wow, I love this story! It was incredible, it really shows everyone the immense suffering that Edward goes through. It is terrific. :)
shnapperdoodlez chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
woah, that was amazing.

The way it's written is so perfect, i didn't want it to end.
Joba Rules chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
Ooh, I like this. Nice character study.
1152178291268291 chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
Oh my God this is awesome! Just the language...its all so...mindblowing.

You are amazing.
jenellebelle chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
this is powerful...I always think about edward losing control- his torment is so lustful and rich at times in the Saga that it overwhelms me ~ and I think - Christ, I wish he would just bite her...fuck her...something...but alas- I am like Edward at the end of this tale- alone. And I don't want him to really end her life as much as claim her- in BD- when he finally turns her after Renesmee comes- I felt cheated-slightly. I craved the passionate scene in which he would be so overcome with her that he would turn her...I guess SM had a different thought process...anyways, i'm rambling. Beautiful one shot- thank you.
delete19843924 chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
wow. this was a great insight into edward's mind, and what he probably had to suffer through when he was first entranced by bella's scent in twilight.

you also succeeded in making this dude want flowers S tsk tsk, have you no shame?

-fan who wants to sniff flowers now?, Mike D
Mona-the-Lisa chapter 1 . 1/22/2009
Oh wow. I'm speechless.

You show Edward's mind so well. I just wanted to keep reading his ancient thoughts.

I'm speechless. Seriously that was the best Edward POV that I've ever read.

w o w
tnuccio chapter 1 . 1/9/2009
wow...that was a great read...I was so drawn in...great job!
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