Reviews for One Step Forward
berry5tz chapter 1 . 11/14/2015
I loved this one!

This has always been a very unique pairing. I wish more people could understand it. Still, great job here! I loved your portrayal of both boys. They need each other. Once Itachi can let go of his feeling of detachment he then can truly live. As for Kakashi, he needs the stability of a love that will become his rock. Keeping him grounded in an otherwise crazy world.

Great job!
UchidaKarasu chapter 1 . 10/19/2009
Yo.

That was pretty awesome! Sad and sort-of depressing, due to the nature. One can't help but wonder how Kakashi reacts after the massacre. But whatever...it is good now, fabulous.

Aside from a couple of spelling and punctuation errors (it was easy to look around), the story was brilliant. Keep 'em coming!

Ja ne!

UK.
lingching chapter 1 . 12/29/2008
Pretty decent one-shot.

Just some minor errors.

Btw, Itachi was thirteen when he massacred his clan and left the village. So I assume he's now a missing nin in your story? (Just ignore me if this is a Timeline? WhatTimeline? fic. :p)

Well, still better than most Itakaka in the English fandom.

I enjoyed it very much.

Thanks! Looking forward to more fics like this. :)