|Reviews for One Step Forward|
| UchidaKarasu chapter 1 . 10/19/2009
That was pretty awesome! Sad and sort-of depressing, due to the nature. One can't help but wonder how Kakashi reacts after the massacre. But whatever...it is good now, fabulous.
Aside from a couple of spelling and punctuation errors (it was easy to look around), the story was brilliant. Keep 'em coming!
| lingching chapter 1 . 12/29/2008
Pretty decent one-shot.
Just some minor errors.
Btw, Itachi was thirteen when he massacred his clan and left the village. So I assume he's now a missing nin in your story? (Just ignore me if this is a Timeline? WhatTimeline? fic. :p)
Well, still better than most Itakaka in the English fandom.
I enjoyed it very much.
Thanks! Looking forward to more fics like this. :)