|Reviews for The Pack|
| Peyton chapter 2 . 1/5/2009
Awesome fic! Are you continuing?
I liked the line about how the question in Wesley's mind changes from 'who he is' to 'what has he done.' Excellent line!
| itslukey chapter 2 . 1/5/2009
I like these, I always enjoy stories that add to what we've seen and may have missed out on more than when people try to take something in an entirely new direction. The first chapter brought me back to a question I have whenever I've watched the movie; whether or not he kills Darden on his first try or if he has to go back and do it again. Because we see Wesley go past the window and he can't pull the trigger, then we see the scene with Fox's story, then it's back to Wesley standing on the moving train again, deciding at the last minute to bend the bullet into the window. I'm not sure if it was 2 different attempts or Wesley recalling Fox's story in his head to persuade himself that this needs to be done. I don't think that's at all relevant to your story, sorry for going off-track, but great work anyway!
| inmate1099 chapter 2 . 12/31/2008
cool..i like how you give an insight to the little bits that the movie didn't have... plz update soon and plz don't kill her at the end like the movie did plz
| inmate1099 chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
pretty cool start...i hope you update soon enough
| anon chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
Have you checked out the Wanted comics books on wikipedia the Fraternity were actually supervillians who secretly killed all the superheroes and remade the world in their own image under their rule they're some awesome characters there this was pretty cool