Reviews for Evening Shadow
mickkila chapter 8 . 11/18/2013
This one made me cry when Charlie was killed by Sam
Guest chapter 8 . 6/30/2012
Amazing ! :)
hermionejean79 chapter 8 . 4/9/2011
This is the first fanfiction I've ever cried over :( RIP Charlie.
Casperace13 chapter 7 . 12/9/2010
Go Bella! I can't believe that Sam and the others showed up, or that they were suprised that Bella hated them so much. Stupid dogs.
TwilightJemS chapter 3 . 2/12/2009
Me, being stupid me, would've tried to suck the venom out myself. Which, of course, wouldn't have worked, since if I was Bella, I would get sick because of the blood! But then again, I did tell you that I'm stupid...
NanMcCullen chapter 8 . 1/25/2009
I'm glad he finally did it. It was needed. Just like in the books, SO much drama could have been avoided if he would have just gotten over his own stubborn pride. Excellent story.
NanMcCullen chapter 7 . 1/25/2009
Good for Bella standing up to that good for nothing asshole, Sam Uley. Power hungry prick. And what a sad chapter that was. She was right though... Sam broke the treaty. I am still sitting here shaking my head over the whole thing.
NanMcCullen chapter 6 . 1/25/2009
Sounds like Edward is FINALLY coming to the conclusion that he needs to change Bella. Duh.
NanMcCullen chapter 5 . 1/25/2009
Stupid Sam. I always felt that he was too power hungry in the books. It wasn't like the Cullens were bad people. There are plenty of humans out there that are far more monstrous than ANY of the Cullens. That includes Jasper and his trouble with restraint. Stupid Sam.
NanMcCullen chapter 4 . 1/25/2009
Oh thank God. I thought you killed some of the Cullens. But now what are they going to do about poor Charlie?
NanMcCullen chapter 3 . 1/25/2009
O M E!

I don't even have words...
NanMcCullen chapter 2 . 1/25/2009
Uh-oh. How did Alice not see THAT coming? Can we all say OOPS?
NanMcCullen chapter 1 . 1/25/2009
Dun dun dun! Wow, that's some secret. I wonder if he was ever in love with Marie, or it was just loneliness. And I wonder if this Aurelio means harm to the Cullen family...
Romance4ever chapter 8 . 1/6/2009
Wonderful. Thankyou for posting it. Romance4ever
MickeyandMinnie chapter 8 . 1/5/2009
Fantastic! You are so good at writing Edward and Bella! Please with whip cream and a cherry on top...Please write a sequel! I am dying to know how he deals with her blood, her transformation, her first year as a newborn, if she goes back to avenge Charlie's death against the pack, does she attend school, and what married life is like for my favorite couple? Of course, even though Bella thinks it is going to be just the two of them for awhile, we still need all of the Cullens around to entertain us! Superb writing my fellow author! Standing ovation!
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