Reviews for Evening Shadow
SodiumLamp0nAHill chapter 8 . 1/31
Wow, that was so heartbreakingly sad! I was NOT expecting it to have that ending/outcome. I thought that the story was going one way for a few chapters, but you managed to have it take a HUGE twist! It was hard to read at some points because of the tradgity and could-have-beens, but it was well written; it was nice and simple, and to the point.

You did a good job with this AU, and all the emotions and characters were believable & realistic. You couldn't help but empathize with all the characters that were caught in the middle, but powerless to help or change anything.

Thank you for sharing your God-given talent for writing! Keep up the good work!
cela chapter 7 . 6/1/2016
this is a great story! it's to bad that the wolves aren't the great and brave protectors they thought themselves to be. it be only fair if bella was to bring retribution for killing her father in cold blood. I think once Charlie got past the burning he would have been ecstatic to have his daughter forever.
mickkila chapter 8 . 11/18/2013
This one made me cry when Charlie was killed by Sam
Guest chapter 8 . 6/30/2012
Amazing ! :)
hermionejean79 chapter 8 . 4/9/2011
This is the first fanfiction I've ever cried over :( RIP Charlie.
Casperace13 chapter 7 . 12/9/2010
Go Bella! I can't believe that Sam and the others showed up, or that they were suprised that Bella hated them so much. Stupid dogs.
TwilightJemS chapter 3 . 2/12/2009
Me, being stupid me, would've tried to suck the venom out myself. Which, of course, wouldn't have worked, since if I was Bella, I would get sick because of the blood! But then again, I did tell you that I'm stupid...
NanMcCullen chapter 8 . 1/25/2009
I'm glad he finally did it. It was needed. Just like in the books, SO much drama could have been avoided if he would have just gotten over his own stubborn pride. Excellent story.
NanMcCullen chapter 7 . 1/25/2009
Good for Bella standing up to that good for nothing asshole, Sam Uley. Power hungry prick. And what a sad chapter that was. She was right though... Sam broke the treaty. I am still sitting here shaking my head over the whole thing.
NanMcCullen chapter 6 . 1/25/2009
Sounds like Edward is FINALLY coming to the conclusion that he needs to change Bella. Duh.
NanMcCullen chapter 5 . 1/25/2009
Stupid Sam. I always felt that he was too power hungry in the books. It wasn't like the Cullens were bad people. There are plenty of humans out there that are far more monstrous than ANY of the Cullens. That includes Jasper and his trouble with restraint. Stupid Sam.
NanMcCullen chapter 4 . 1/25/2009
Oh thank God. I thought you killed some of the Cullens. But now what are they going to do about poor Charlie?
NanMcCullen chapter 3 . 1/25/2009
O M E!

I don't even have words...
NanMcCullen chapter 2 . 1/25/2009
Uh-oh. How did Alice not see THAT coming? Can we all say OOPS?
NanMcCullen chapter 1 . 1/25/2009
Dun dun dun! Wow, that's some secret. I wonder if he was ever in love with Marie, or it was just loneliness. And I wonder if this Aurelio means harm to the Cullen family...
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