|Reviews for Bourne In Gotham|
| Finn Lake chapter 1 . 1/20/2009
I really enjoy this- it seems like it could really turn into a good story. I noticed that it has been awhile since you wrote it though- are you planning on continuing it? I really hope so.
| beth9874 chapter 1 . 12/29/2008
I am loving this story,
Don't be put off by the lack of reviews, this fandom is full of tweens who just write Mary-Sue after Mary-Sue
I can sense a winner with this story, keep on going and it could get the recognision it deserves.
The only slight problem is that during the change in location it can get confusing
'“Perhaps if I took a look at the footage and see what they can tell us?” The Butler nodded in agreement, too lost in worry to talk.
Dirk Venderburke was CIA, Black Ops CIA to be exact, and he liked to kill. In truth he enjoyed the thrill of the hunt and the kill, sometimes it was almost sexual. As younger man, he’d almost '
For example a ~ would help break it up so that people don't get confused.
Despite that minor problem you've got the tools in your hand to make a real good fic
Keep up the good work