|Reviews for Servitude to Stockholm|
| xxInnocent Dreamsxx chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
Yor right it doesnt desevre a ta da it deserves ta da de de da!
| oLIVEgREENcRAYON chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
I've been reading through your stories, a couple so far, and figured I'd wait 'till I'd read them all to comment, but you mentioned the stockholm thing, and I knew they weren't actually in another country, as such, and it took me a minute to realise the hints to stockholm syndrome. I like the connection there.
Also, I love the general style of writing you have I'm not sure exactly what (help, I know -_-) but I still like it
Anyway, I'm off to read the rest Keep up the greatness, lol.
| Makayla chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
You just don't give yourself enough credit. This is an amazing "overview", as you would like to call it. Your writing is exceptional, and I'm truly jealous.
| Spirit of The Gauntlets chapter 1 . 1/7/2009
I'm sorry, what did you say? This doesn't deserve a "ta-da?" Excuse me... no. That's wrong. This is an awesome story. Loved it. Loved it loved it. Kudos to you!
| shibara1310 chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
Lmao, your author's note made me laughed. XD
A Clorox Bleach commercial? o_o; That's awesome inspiration right there! :3 It's a million times better than being inspired by a Britney Spears song...*cough*
MOVING ON. XD
I really liked this! It was very different than anything else I've read...I love how you write Axel; He's so...yay. X3 And YES that's 'yay' and not a typo that really means 'gay' because that's NOT what I meant and it wouldn't make sense with this review. O.o' Lol...
One thing I noticed were the run-in sentences...were they intended? Because I thought they went really well with the story. _ And really, I really enjoyed reading this~ and it does deserve a 'ta da!' X3
| Schmelly Inc chapter 1 . 12/29/2008
.~omg~..::confetti and sparkles::.! ayay!
Firstly, sorry I haven't gotten back to you sooner, but AHH... Christmas! I'll gush about your *gift*-angels singing- in a e-mail a little later! And MERRY CHRISTMAS since I missed the 25.
Heh. I think it is you who is the magic creator! _ OMG, I loved this so much! It's really different from what I'm used to reading from you, and it's seriously great. You know what... 'TA-DA' tee hee, I defy you! I think it really deserves it. Seriously good. Keep doing whatever it is you are doing... which you know, you could totally tell me if you get the chance... XXD Heehe. I have to choke back all my gushing for later, though... I write too much as it is, ha.
Amazing. Faving. Peace. XD
Lol, you and your weird/genius inspirations... XD Clorox, eh?
| Midnite Angel chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
M, this was so sweet! (not in the fluffy way, mind you X3)
No, really, it was different, and me like different too *nods*
| UnchartedHeart chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
Really good, just like all of your stories! XD
| kirinlover chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
Sweet story, again. ;3 Dude! I was just gonna' write something like this the other day! O.o But then I got scared, and decided to stick to fluffy stuff. Lol! But, you pulled it off perfectly. I love how they both love and hate, loving and hating each other (did that make sense?) Lol!. You know- that pleasure/pain thing we all can't resist. (blushes)
Even though this story is short, I love it. Such a brilliant idea! I like the way your mind works Manwatheil. X3