Reviews for The Last Kiss
Giovanna chapter 3 . 8/25/2014
Oh so good! I wish it had more chapters... real good!
silkysexybitch chapter 3 . 9/7/2013
Holy shit.

That was out of this world.

Two point five chapters of teasing followed by the hottest fan fiction make-out session of all time. Holy hell.

This should have been a 20 chapter extravaganza of awesomeness. But it's PERFECT the way it is also.

jmarrero16 chapter 3 . 10/3/2010
continue its good. do they actually go to the party?
Telain of Lorien chapter 3 . 7/14/2010
great story :) it was really cute
MarciaRebafan chapter 3 . 3/4/2010
Aww, I feel like kissing someone now LOL. This was so adorable and such a nice theme to explore, too. After all, we do know that she left him with a Dear John letter, so they never quite got their chance to share a last kiss.

This last chapter was exceptionally good because my soft shipper heart melted repeatedly while I was reading it lol, so much Jibbs cuteness

Thanks for forcing...erm...suggesting that I read this story!
MatteaAM chapter 3 . 3/4/2010
First off, a head-slap for you, for thinking it was a silly idea.


Second off, a head-slap for me, for not reviewing this.


I am such a terrible person. It was just back in the day when I didn't review. Now I try to review everything I like.

Sometimes I just forget. Unless it's Ellie - she hunts me down till I review it. :)

Anyhow, this was great. I loved it, especially the ending. Made my heart melt.

madame.alexandra chapter 3 . 11/27/2009
You might have thought it was a silly idea, and it might have come off silly from someone else, but you did it really well. It had more of an adult time theme instead of a cute one, which took the silliness out. Good job!
4sweetdreams chapter 1 . 1/7/2009
This is the second of your stories that I've read today! Great ension...just right! :) I'm looking forward to reading more from you!
Gabiroba chapter 3 . 1/1/2009
great story... you captured them very well. I just loved it!

VerityFrancesB chapter 3 . 12/31/2008
*Gibbs slaps Maddy* Honestly Maddy, you need to have more about your abilities. This was brilliant.

I loved the bit with Abby, and that Gibbs knew exactly what she wanted.

The whole thing worked brilliantly poppet! And no one will hate you for it silly!



tearsofamiko chapter 3 . 12/30/2008
Amazing! So intense, capturing every bit of the electricity between them! Ah, it was wonderful. The last part was great - hot and sweet and satisfying. Truly, it was wonderful. I liked the whole "the last kiss is always a first kiss" thing, which would definitely have been true for them. Ya did great.

Kudos to you, dear one!

:D Tears
aserene chapter 3 . 12/30/2008
I love it! I think you perfectly captured their love for each other and their attraction. There is no way they could have a last kiss, it's just not possible with them.

Fantastic work!
elizabethkeen chapter 3 . 12/30/2008
Aww, no need to feel disappointed. I felt it was a good ending. You did a wonderful job with this fic, Im glad they finally got no interruptions that halted that kiss.

Great job hun!
leebug1219 chapter 3 . 12/30/2008
I loved it... it was so cute! Can't wait for you to write more stories!
x0NCISx0 chapter 2 . 12/30/2008
seriously... leaving us hanging like that is not nice. didnt your parents ever teach you to play nice.. haha. very intense though... excellent. but please update soon.
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