|Reviews for Wayfaring|
| KrittleTwilighted chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
| weisyloveslemons chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
Oh my I don't even have words to say exactly how I feel about this story. You are right it isn't like your other work but even without the usual darkward this story was pure brilliance
| Yuffie's Ninja Insanity chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
This was brilliant and probably the most educated story I've read on this site. Awesome job! I enjoyed it tremendously!
| Steel Drums and Island Dances chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
So very many interesting concepts in this fic... I always wondered if someone that perfect could get boring, predictable. Even his flaws are perfect, for Salazar's sake. It was interesting to hear from someone who could grasp that. Exceedingly well-written. But I've wondered even more about how the Cullens would handle prejudice. They were born with those beliefs... are they still there? I'm actually African-American myself, so of course I've wondered. It's strange, to think that someone so "flawless" could be a racist. Kind of scary, really. But it makes more sense than the alternative. Very realistic, the way you wrote it. And the lemon was beautiful. I've always been a fan of Dom/Sub type lemons. It was sweet, in a twisted sort of way. Great fic, fabulous job. Now write a book for us bookworm losers!
| 4everhis91 chapter 1 . 9/8/2009
a different direction is an understatement. I had trouble getting my mind to settle into the story because it felt so OOC. but I also could not stop reading because even though it seems so OOC when you go a bit deeper, I think these thing would be found. There would have been the adjustment period after New Moon. There is no way something so emotional can happen without the leftover bagage to deal with. It was an interesting take on the events and I enjoed Edward to being quite so perfect and Bella being a bit stronger but in a dark way.
| tehrager chapter 1 . 9/8/2009
This is brilliant. It's one of the best one-shots nothing I've ever read. Absolutely loved it.
| Ms. Leading08 chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
I really liked this.
I appreciate the fact that you gave Edward an actual legitimate reason beyond his own self-deprecation to disprove of his and Bella's relationship.
And...I'm going to have to agree with Angela. I think Edward Cullen probably would be kind of unattractive in his perfection.
Their lemon was also pretty schmexy. I enjoyed it.
All in all, I thought this was a great story...err, one shot. Everything you write is well thought out and researched and just...amazing. Seriously. Keep up the good work :)
| bklover08 chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
OK, so I don't remember if I reviewed this when I last read it, which was probably several months ago, but I did want to tell you how much I really enjoyed it! The change in the balance between the 2 of them and the re-evaluation of each of them as individuals...she has to see and know his faults, he has to see her as a real person, not a china doll...it was so delightfully and thoughtfully done! So thanks again! ;)
| summer35 chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
Wow. This was so right on so many levels. The total disconnect after someone, especially someone you love, decides to commit suicide, the slow and depressing ascent to sanity, the desperate attempts to feel alive again. It felt so heavy, but as I said... so RIGHT.
Thanks for writing. I totally enjoyed it. Just WOW.
| LJ Summers chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
Wow! I really enjoyed this story. I was nervous about 1/3 of the way through, but I was very good (for me) and didn't slide to the end of the page to see how it turned out.
And I'm Glad! :)
I think this is a very real, rational rendering of a relationship. And wow, wasn't that alliterative of me...
Great work! :)
| sophie921 chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
Nice story - and hot, too! I liked the pseudo-sleeping thing - that must be a relief to someone who has not slept in such a long time. I enjoyed this very much, thank you.
| iamonlyone chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
I have to tell you, I've read a lot of fan fic on Bella and Edward, and your story, without a doubt, is one of the best I've read.
You've delved into a whole different aspect, showing them as flawed, changing, adjusting characters, and they arrive at a place where they love each other for who they really ARE.
Thank you for your insightful and refreshing story!
| gasolinerain chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
Wow. I haven't read this voice in a while. I love it. That voice that's not all sugar happy apple pie. Where Bella is in love with a VAMPIRE. & what Edward did really damaged Bella. & things don't fix themselves in a day.
Am I making sense? Anyway, I'm really glad I found this story, it opened my eyes a bit wider. Made me see a deeper(sordid) side to this Twilight world. Thanks.
I think it's too late to wish for this story to continue, but I'd be mighty happy if it did. I think you've done a magical job, I need to know what happens to these characters & learn more about them.
You have a beautiful way with words.
| reagan o'connor chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
Very impressive. Love your use of alliteration, symbolism and... well, the lemons are very. nicely. done.
This was recommended by a friend, and I am happy to say it was well worth the read.
A ten. Absolutely.
| sk-lou chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
Loved it. I really enjoyed the third person pov- very well done. Loved the convos between them- something there is not enough of in the books. Nice to see them interacting in a more adult way(not referring to the sex- although I liked your approach to that too). Thanks for this- I very much enjoyed reading!