|Reviews for Of Sound Mind|
| Guest chapter 9 . 2/11
such a good story... i'd love to hear how it ends...
| sunshinekc chapter 9 . 11/16/2014
Ok, i love this story. Wasn't sure bout it at first but it quickly grew on me so please feed my new addiction and give me some new chapters! I need to know what happens next!
| Guest chapter 9 . 10/23/2014
what is wrong with you ******!?
| Guest chapter 7 . 10/23/2014
hey ridelys cool when he's not trying to kill samus, the fact that he's a dragon is epic
| Epyon Masa chapter 1 . 10/7/2014
I've read this fic multiple times and I must admit, I was a little creeped out by the idea of Samus and Ridley as a couple, but it surely grew on me in time. Still, I'm wondering, is it discontinued or what? I'm looking forward to what happens with Samus, now that she has her memories and all.
| devil chapter 9 . 4/25/2014
I can't wait for the next chapter
| Rebel-Angel6 chapter 9 . 1/6/2014
Hmm, I'm not sure what to make of this fanfic.
In the beginning, I liked it because it wasn't so OOC, with Ridley acting like Ridley and Samus being Samus... But then in the middle, it got a little too lovey-dovey, cutesy-wootsy-patootsy for my taste (with only a few spots that Ridley was kind of acting like he would have in that situation. I get that love changes people but holy sh**. You can hate and love someone at the same time). One of the things that people hated the most about "Metroid: Other M" was because Samus was all "Eeek! Oh no, it Radley, imma so scaredy!"
But to chapter 9, it got a little better and I liked that you could see a crack in samus' tough exterior. There's nothing wrong with giving her a little of a vulnerable side. Having a game character who shows so little is a great inspiration for writers, because they can add to that. But only a handful are actually capable of pulling it off successfully.
| ChronoTriggerMan chapter 1 . 12/10/2013
I like how Ridley is portrayed as a man...er, dragon...alien person of honor. Wishing to do get victory in a legitimate way.
| the naru foxxx chapter 1 . 11/18/2013
Ridley is a she not a he and don't claim you where doing a rule 63. because if you where you would have says rule 63 or fem. Ridley in the story description
| samus chapter 3 . 11/9/2013
THIS WOULD NEVER HAPPEN
| Ancient Dragon writer chapter 9 . 10/20/2013
awesome story... I'm liking it... keep it up... seriously.
I want to read the next chapter when possible
| ArcAngelCrystal chapter 9 . 8/22/2013
This is a wonderful story, I look forward to reading more please update soon. ArcAngelCrystal
| Uncle Twawki chapter 9 . 8/15/2013
please don't stop writing. it is a great story. I wish to see the ending. I like love stories that aren't for pansies. It still has action which is really well done. Again please don't stop for too long. I understand breaks, But don't give up. Your doing great.
| RidleyM-LP chapter 3 . 7/24/2013
WTF!? This is a cool story but how the f*** can Samus understand the words Ridley said there and answer? She didn't had used her translator:
Ridley was in the middle of his pondering when he felt a soft tapping on his elbow. He turned to see Samus standing there, looking very nervous. "What do you want…?" -WTF
Samus fidgeted slightly before answering, looking a little confused. "I was just wondering what you were yelling at me when I woke up…you said something about a 'power suit'…what's that?"
Ridley sighed, setting the ship on auto-pilot and getting up. "Come with me…I'll show you…" Ridley started walking towards the rear of the ship when he noticed Samus wasn't following him. He looked around at her to see her still standing in the same spot. "…What?" - WTF
"I…kinda don't know what you're saying…" Samus said, nervously. "All I'm hearing is screeching and…stuff…"
"What are you talking about…you should be able to understand me just fin- Wait a second…" Ridley gave Samus a dead-panned look. "Where's your translator? The thing that was in your ear?" Ridley pointed at the side of his head for emphasis.
Realization hit Samus. "Oh…you mean this?"
Maybe it's just me but it's irritating me xD
| amazing chapter 9 . 7/14/2013
such plot twist! You, my friend, managed to get me begging for more. Keep up the good work