|Reviews for Of Sound Mind|
| Rebel-Angel6 chapter 9 . 1/6
Hmm, I'm not sure what to make of this fanfic.
In the beginning, I liked it because it wasn't so OOC, with Ridley acting like Ridley and Samus being Samus... But then in the middle, it got a little too lovey-dovey, cutesy-wootsy-patootsy for my taste (with only a few spots that Ridley was kind of acting like he would have in that situation. I get that love changes people but holy sh**. You can hate and love someone at the same time). One of the things that people hated the most about "Metroid: Other M" was because Samus was all "Eeek! Oh no, it Radley, imma so scaredy!"
But to chapter 9, it got a little better and I liked that you could see a crack in samus' tough exterior. There's nothing wrong with giving her a little of a vulnerable side. Having a game character who shows so little is a great inspiration for writers, because they can add to that. But only a handful are actually capable of pulling it off successfully.
| ChronoTriggerMan chapter 1 . 12/10/2013
I like how Ridley is portrayed as a man...er, dragon...alien person of honor. Wishing to do get victory in a legitimate way.
| the naru foxxx chapter 1 . 11/18/2013
Ridley is a she not a he and don't claim you where doing a rule 63. because if you where you would have says rule 63 or fem. Ridley in the story description
| samus chapter 3 . 11/9/2013
THIS WOULD NEVER HAPPEN
| Ancient Dragon writer chapter 9 . 10/20/2013
awesome story... I'm liking it... keep it up... seriously.
I want to read the next chapter when possible
| ArcAngelCrystal chapter 9 . 8/22/2013
This is a wonderful story, I look forward to reading more please update soon. ArcAngelCrystal
| aperson1111 chapter 9 . 8/15/2013
please don't stop writing. it is a great story. I wish to see the ending. I like love stories that aren't for pansies. It still has action which is really well done. Again please don't stop for too long. I understand breaks, But don't give up. Your doing great.
| RidleyM-LP chapter 3 . 7/24/2013
WTF!? This is a cool story but how the f*** can Samus understand the words Ridley said there and answer? She didn't had used her translator:
Ridley was in the middle of his pondering when he felt a soft tapping on his elbow. He turned to see Samus standing there, looking very nervous. "What do you want…?" -WTF
Samus fidgeted slightly before answering, looking a little confused. "I was just wondering what you were yelling at me when I woke up…you said something about a 'power suit'…what's that?"
Ridley sighed, setting the ship on auto-pilot and getting up. "Come with me…I'll show you…" Ridley started walking towards the rear of the ship when he noticed Samus wasn't following him. He looked around at her to see her still standing in the same spot. "…What?" - WTF
"I…kinda don't know what you're saying…" Samus said, nervously. "All I'm hearing is screeching and…stuff…"
"What are you talking about…you should be able to understand me just fin- Wait a second…" Ridley gave Samus a dead-panned look. "Where's your translator? The thing that was in your ear?" Ridley pointed at the side of his head for emphasis.
Realization hit Samus. "Oh…you mean this?"
Maybe it's just me but it's irritating me xD
| amazing chapter 9 . 7/14/2013
such plot twist! You, my friend, managed to get me begging for more. Keep up the good work
| very good chapter 2 . 7/14/2013
you got the personalities incredibly acurately, keep up the good work
| Elemental Queen chapter 9 . 6/28/2013
Thanks for the update!
| samusaran101 chapter 8 . 6/26/2013
Uh oh. She got her memories back. Poop. Keep writing! You and this story are awesome!
| samusaran101 chapter 7 . 6/26/2013
Nice chapter! _
| samusaran101 chapter 6 . 6/26/2013
Aww that was ssuch a cute chapter! :)
| samusaran101 chapter 5 . 6/26/2013
Ooooooooo myyyyyyy Godddddd. THIS STORY IS COMPLETELY FUCKING AWESOME.