Reviews for Diving In
Guest chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
Would love to read more...
Crimson and Chrome 42 chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
Have you abandoned this one? Because it's a fabulous start and I'd love to know how it turns out.
Nicole chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
I love add more Jamison is my favorite character!
AnneWithane chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
Welcome to ! I'm so excited to see your story, and can't wait to read more of this one...as well as the other one you mentioned. :)

You're off to a great start. Will Lonnie stick his foot in his mouth at the policemen's ball? Inquiring minds wanna know!
Meg chapter 1 . 1/6/2009
Very nice start! I hope you continue with it.
gracie1222 chapter 1 . 1/4/2009
Love it!
jenbayer chapter 1 . 12/30/2008
Absolutely love what you've written so far. Could there be love on the horizon for my favorite Lt. Jamison? Keep up the good work!1
HolyZombieJesus chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
You write well, but I have to point out some serious problems with your story.

Three cops would have had the boy in a life jacket. In most states, it's the law.

This plot has been done numerous times already, right down to your new lady DA who seems so perfect in every way.

You're good at writing. Take this story somewhere new.