Reviews for F L A W L E S S
beywheelz chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
I like it but poor gray..
RageFeline chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
wow! i really liked it, though it's hard to imagine Lienna cursing, even in her head.

can't wait for the next chapter! :D
Beaslays chapter 1 . 12/29/2008
*sprays water onto keyboard while reading* *wipes keyboard while reading*

*expression all throughout: :O*

Imagine my surprise when this lovely little piece pops up in my mailbox along with your PM. You've definitely got something powerful going on behind this, and the prose here is just simple enough that we get just the barest of emotions from Gray but the wording tells me that there's more underneath those emotions. It's also suspenseful enough to make me want to know what's going on.

I love your portrayal of their relationship here. So bittersweet...and only just in the prologue!

Eh...and here I was just thinking we needed a sci-fi fic in the B-daman category the other day.

And concepts? What sort of concepts do you mean? I can't really think of anything...