Reviews for Suds in the bucket
i luv niki4444 chapter 1 . 2/23/2012
Ignore the jerks that told you to stop writing! Its actually pretty good!

If the disclaimer was on a different line it would be awesome!

But hey nobodys perfect so for all of you out there that have only insults to say and are just plain mean you can shut up and kiss my ass!

If you don't like it then don't waste time revieving dipshits!

I loved the play on words! continue writing!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/8/2011
Excuse me. What the fuck does this say?

It's so fucking illegible.

1) What the hell is up with the random disclaimer?

2) Why is everything centered? God, child. It's distracting and annoying. Please ? Don't mess with your fucking toolbar in Microsoft Word. Click the button that says JUSTIFY . NOT FUCKING CENTER.

3) Capitalization, much?

4) Sheesh, do you have a writing disability? Stop it. Stop writing. NOW. Just turn off your computer. And never write again. At least, not until you get better at grammar, punctuation, and spelling.

5) Are you a troll? I don't understand how someone can fail. THIS. FUCKING. MUCH.
Daze Rivers chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
First and foremost? The disclaimer should not be on the same line as the story.

Secondly, Where the Heck is the punctuation? And the format? You shouldn't have it all in a stream, word after word, never ending, never having separate clauses or independent sentences?

Thirdly, it's a *little* short don't you think?

Fourthly,' ?' Yes my fourth comment is a question mark. I shall repeat '?'
S.M.W chapter 1 . 2/20/2009