Reviews for Ash's brand new adventure
Guest chapter 2 . 1/2
I got dis
Guest chapter 1 . 8/14/2014
Of course this follows porn logic where everyone is a horny pokemon/teen
Guest chapter 2 . 6/29/2014
IDIOT.
guest chapter 2 . 6/9/2014
Seriously? You've given up after one chapter? WEAK!
sexmaster chapter 1 . 6/9/2014
As opposed to my earlier comment, I should have read further... Dray was trying to get May, not N trying to get Hilda
sexmaster chapter 1 . 6/9/2014
and some green haired guy trying to use a rose and a Roselia to get a busty brunette girl

Hehehe, N trying to have sex with White/Hilda
fishhead chapter 1 . 2/24/2014
i thought may and drew were tg and pokemon sex what the hell is that sick pplz these days ash and dawn or ash and serena (X and Y series) are good ash and may ash will go crazy!
Guest chapter 2 . 10/16/2013
You promised a May X Ash Lemon you ass! I don't entirely mind the Ash X Pokemon but People deserve better than this.
Jc chapter 2 . 9/26/2013
Taking over time I'm am the hidden helper of the person who wrote
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Unknown chapter 2 . 9/10/2013
Seriously, you only wrote the first chapter and then ran out of ideas
Guest chapter 2 . 7/13/2013
I ll take over zombrya
Mystery Guy chapter 2 . 2/27/2013
BITCH!YOU SUCK AND HAVE NO POTENTIAL!IDIOT!FAGGOT
Guest chapter 2 . 2/16/2013
asshole
YOUR MOM chapter 2 . 12/30/2012
sup
Guest chapter 2 . 11/10/2012
sucky
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