Reviews for Of Damsels and Knights
lost in details chapter 1 . 11/23/2014
Normally I only readily review when a story really catches my eye, and this one certainly has. I'm a staunch believer that any pairing can come to fruition if written realistically, and I have to say... the way you wrote both Kakashi and Tented was perfect! The banter was fascinating with a touch of something more, something else you'd have to look underneath the underneath to catch and comprehend. It's refreshing to see Tented paired up with a character who is not Neji, just as refreshing as it is to see Kakashi paired up with a character that does not include a member of Team 7, past or present. Personally, I like to pair him up with Tented or Ino, but for some reason, I think Tented fits him better in this respect. You write their characterization very well, and I would hope that if you ever had time in the future... that you could perhaps indulge in writing a sequel to this drabble. Haha, either way I look forward to reading more from you in the future. Happy writing, and take care! :)
Guest chapter 1 . 9/13/2014
STINKS!
thelastfight chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
unf yessss. moar plzzzz. nicely written! :)
ALCzysz17 chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
I thought it flowed rather nicely. Had you not said that you stopped and continued layer I don't think anyone would have noticed. Love the pairing! _
Dwellin chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
Good fight scene and loved the tension you have building there. *nods*

What I especically enjoyed was the fact that, unliked so many Kakashi fics, you don't have Tenten painted as a drooling fangirl melting into a pile of mush. Instead, sooooo appreciated that you had her reacting more normally.
Animefangirl95 chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
Great job:)
Orz QUEEN OF RANDOMNESS Orz chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
im tired of dense neji too XD
i think ten is awesome with anyone lol
and i think you did a great job capturing her character in this :3
it IS a liiiiittle disconnected, but you pulled it off :) i wouldn't have known if you didn't tell me keep writing those fics :D
Ioga chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
Heh, wandered in here through a well-deserved favourite link. :)

I loved the play you made with the title. It had me a bit worried, to be honest, so I was positively surprised by the outcome.

I decided I want to read more of your stuff as a result. :)

Minor comment: I'd maybe add a paragraph break between Tenten saying "thanks for the spar" and Kakashi asking about the rematch, because it sounded like Tenten was saying both things now.

Thanks for this!
xXWingedWerefoxXx chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
I'm glad someone's trying to change the routine, Nejiten gets boring (especially when most are way ooc). You made the sparring easy to imagine and did a good job at showing Kakashi's skills without the ninjutsu. I look forward to reading more. MOAR!
Sepsis chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
That was really good, you got me interested in Tenten! :) I always thought she was cool but she has no screentime and everything...
DarkAnonymous324 chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
I love this fic

I hope that u will write more kakashi and tenten fics
ForeverFighter chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
You're right, Tenji is so overrated. I LOVE ALL THESE NEW PAIRINGS YOU'VE INTRODUCED ME TO! _
Bloody Sapphire Blade chapter 1 . 1/30/2010
I like it. Good job. I totally agree about that 'damsel in distress' thing when it comes to these 2.
gwenstacey chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
This was very well written, it didn't seem disconnected to me. I enjoyed the back and forth between them, it was almost like an argument without words rather than a fight. Very interesting
MurakazeOri chapter 1 . 6/9/2009
Much love for writing Tenten x (SomeoneotherthanNeji) especially Kakashi, so smexy, really enjoyed this, would love to see more! Maybe a multi-chap?
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