|Reviews for Lonely Moon|
| babyvfan chapter 8 . 7/16
Holy...*lets out a low whistle* holy hell, I didn't expect that. Any of that. Poor Draco though. He really had no choice in the matter-for any of it. And on top of that, he found out he's a dad. However it does prove that he loves his son. He gave up everything for Scorpius
| babyvfan chapter 6 . 7/16
Oh dear lord. I'm with Teddy and Scopirus though. Harry and Ginny are not a good match
| babyvfan chapter 5 . 7/16
Wow. Wow. Wow. Scorpius a werewolf. Another thing that I did see coming: the hinny kiss, which I really feel will do more harm than good
| babyvfan chapter 4 . 7/16
Ooooooooooh. Shit is about to go DOWN
| babyvfan chapter 3 . 7/16
Scorpius nooooo. *shakes head* you are sooooo-I'm done, but I love this story
| babyvfan chapter 2 . 7/16
This is turning out to be quite interesting. Who would have ever guess Scoprious would turn out to be a little troublemaker? I'm honestly quite surprised. I've read tons of stories where he's so shy and quiet. However I'm proud that McGonagall pointed out Snape's errors in teaching: judging Harry based off his own beef with James. Not that I see Harry doing that because he's MUCH MORE mature and sweet and FAIR. But it's good that she puts it out there so he doesn't become a Snape. What I find interesting is that Scorpius is a Mafloy but he's having problems reading and writing and is seriously a little troublemaker
| babyvfan chapter 1 . 7/16
Scorpius? You have Scorpius? This is a story I've stumbled upon many times-seen it on so many favorites and fic recs that I finally decided to give it a read. Glad I did. So far the first chapter is interesting
| Cheryl chapter 10 . 7/11
Hilarious chapter! I couldn't stop laughing after Teddy said " Scorpius says you have a second family in Essex!" Perfect sentence for Teddy to say. Amazing job!
| Cheryl chapter 9 . 7/11
It's great. I suppose it could be better if there wasn't so much swearing in it, but other than that it's really a great piece of work.
| BethaniaStClair chapter 1 . 7/11
Wow! This was amazing! Spot on characterisation, and fantastic dialogue. There were a few misspellings of magical things, e.g. Boggart and Borgin and Burkes, but otherwise typo free. I really enjoyed your take on Ginny. At first I was frustrated because I thought her immaturity was just you not advancing her character from a 16 year old which I found quite irritating, but now it all makes sense. Excellent plot twist! I've never really seen that used in a fanfiction before, so kudos for originality. It was fascinating to see how a 'normal' twenty-something would behave compared to Harry and Draco. Scorpius and Ted were delightful. Good job!
| haydensister chapter 16 . 7/2
I just found this fic, and have to say it is so gloriously beautiful. Thank you for this incredibly lovely story... I may have cried happy tears at the end.
| Guest chapter 15 . 7/1
Heart touching and amazing
| Guest chapter 16 . 6/30
| AS chapter 16 . 6/30
This story was utterly beautiful. It kept me hooked for hours and for days! It was still haunting me when I was not reading. The subtle way you described all the characters, the growing relationships, the emotions... I loved all of it. It made my heart ache in more ways than one!
Thank you for this!
| troublemakergirlSly chapter 16 . 6/29
Awesome, it's really cool your story, I've been so excited with it... Didn't Imagine how it would end.
Think you know "sasuhinas fan", she's one of my bff's, she told me about your story. Loved it.
Keeping an eye on your stories,
Wish you the best.