Reviews for Lonely Moon
Neferpatra chapter 16 . 12/6/2016
It was really fun to read this story! Thanks
SammyTulip chapter 16 . 12/4/2016
This was a beautiful story. I loved all the raw emotions. Well done xoxo
liquidsoap chapter 1 . 11/28/2016
this was beautiful and amazing. objectively, I thought the writing would be more traditional in style, but it became different to my interpretation, to its betterment. the boys were hilarious, although I missed Leo when they weren't in school. the boys were so believable. Draco and Harry seemed so sad - while the topic of their orientation never seemed to come up - I would love to imagine that it would be in my lifetime not defining oneself by orientation would become the norm - of
course it won't and even I myself think in those limiting terms. there's a lot of details I would have liked to have read more of, particularly how RW and HG came to be so friendly with Draco. I actually read this story mostly backwards, from ending chapter to earlier ones! really lovely story. if you want to reply to this comment I'm xunglu3dx on tumblr and liquidsoap on AO3
Seyuki Arkane chapter 16 . 11/30/2016
The idea is really cool ! I like this story, thank to you a lot !
Good luck for the next.
See ya !
Seyu'
Guest chapter 16 . 11/22/2016
I absolutely loved it!
Waxscorpius chapter 16 . 11/17/2016
Such a sweet story. I never believed in perfection, but this really changed my mind. I have re-read this and still cry at the plight that Draco had suffered. But he got Harry in the end, so oh well. I strongly believe that this should be the theme story of drarry, if there ever is one. Good job!
Rebecca chapter 16 . 11/11/2016
This is quite an amazing story I loved every bit of it (except ginny she fucking annoyed me) an I loved especially how u endid the story it flowed beautifully
black heide chapter 16 . 11/11/2016
U may see a post just posted that says rebecca an how I loved ur story an love how ur ended it it flowed beautifully that was me sorry I forgot to sign on
AngelsBeast chapter 16 . 11/1/2016
this is a piece of art. slow burning romance and characters written differently but awesome.
UniqueConsence chapter 16 . 11/1/2016
After so many years this is still my absolute favourite story. i read it once every year or so and every single time it awes me over and over again.
AnoushkaBarth chapter 11 . 10/22/2016
Whenever Teddy or Scorpius swear, I'm reminded of Scout from To Kill A Mockingbird when she went through her swear word phase. It's pretty effing adorable :3
AnoushkaBarth chapter 10 . 10/22/2016
Hi, I hope you read this review containing both criticism and praise. I love your writing, it keeps me interested even without steamy Drarry romance xD But I'd like to point out that you have a few plotholes. In this chapter, Teddy wouldn't have asked Harry that in the end, because both he AND Scorpius heard Ginny storming into the bedroom, and hence logically both of them heard the thing about the second family.
You had another inconsistency during the last Quidditch match, a few chapters back, when Harry thinks that the Gryffindor seeker is a slender young lad with an ability to make amazing turns. However, in the Quidditch match before that, Harry mentally commends VINELY for being a very good Gryffindor seeker despite her fragile build.
I'm not sure if anyone has pointed this out before, but please take note. It's a shame to have such a jarring note in such a sweet sonata.
Guest chapter 16 . 10/14/2016
I loved reading this so much thank you
Guest chapter 16 . 9/25/2016
I really enjoyed this story. It developed beautifully.
Me chapter 16 . 9/15/2016
This was amazing. Awesome story line tons of comedy Sceines. And an over all good plot ending. This has been the best dearth fic I have ever read. It tops the other one that I can't remember the name
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