|Reviews for Making a Move|
| ShreddingRibbons chapter 3 . 9/15/2009
sa, are you going to write more? you should, its turning out really well.
| Lara-Van chapter 3 . 2/28/2009
Aw... Adorable, in a sick, twisted kind of way. It's like the Syelle version of the Eclaire plane ride!
Looking forward to an update!
| Lara-Van chapter 2 . 2/28/2009
Ha! Now that's excellent. I like the Sylar POV beginning to this chapter.
The last section was kind of confusing. Because of the lack of any identifiers, it was really hard to tell who was speaking when, which meant I couldn't get any sense of wth was going on here.
| Lara-Van chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
Hm... I like it. Syelle is always awesome to the power of a billion, so kudos on that.
I have more to say, but I don't remember what it was.
| Lemomina chapter 2 . 2/21/2009
I really like this , Please continue
Though the timeline is a bit confusing
| MariShal chapter 2 . 2/8/2009
| Readwitch chapter 2 . 2/7/2009
I'm confused about the timeline, but othr than that,
i really like this.
| eternalcrush chapter 1 . 1/10/2009
| No One Mourns the Wicked chapter 1 . 12/31/2008
Great first chapter! I can't wait to see the rest of this!
| thesoftbreezeandtheharshwind chapter 1 . 12/31/2008
I like your first chapter, it is interesting.
Oh,how I wish that the stupid writer's strike never happened and they went on with this storyline instead!
Update soon :)
| katie farmer chapter 1 . 12/29/2008
this is awesome, please write next chap soon