Reviews for The Blood Crystal
AbruptlyChagrined chapter 12 . 3/2/2014
She broke Zafrina's stuff! LOL
Im surprised you didn't mention more about her reaction to Carlisle's appearance with her new eyes, or her reaction to the change in her voice.
AbruptlyChagrined chapter 11 . 3/2/2014
Oh crap...
AbruptlyChagrined chapter 10 . 3/2/2014
I Loved it!
AbruptlyChagrined chapter 9 . 3/2/2014
Maybe im a little crazy, but that sounded like a lot of fun to me.
AbruptlyChagrined chapter 8 . 3/2/2014
I knew this was inspired by Romancing the Stone, but was too polite to say anything, lol.
It's very humorous picturing Mike as a Hispanic dude.
AbruptlyChagrined chapter 7 . 3/2/2014
Great chapter. :-)
AbruptlyChagrined chapter 6 . 3/2/2014
Yeah, that Spider Monkey line was from goof ass Melissa Rosenberg I guess. Not in the original story.

I was a bit thrown in this chapter when the very serious fight with Victoria was suddenly turned into a jolly wrestling match with the bros, and he introduces them to her like they hadn't already met on the first plane and had traveled together for hours.
AbruptlyChagrined chapter 5 . 3/2/2014
Whee! Emmett and Jasper like adventures. Me too.
AbruptlyChagrined chapter 4 . 3/2/2014
Did James sabotage the road to get the bus to stop?
AbruptlyChagrined chapter 3 . 3/2/2014
LOL "fwoopy".
AbruptlyChagrined chapter 2 . 3/2/2014
Haha that part with the horny TSA agent totally cracked me up. Poor Edward. Not having the best day, is he?
AbruptlyChagrined chapter 1 . 3/2/2014
I'm so into this already.
BridieM chapter 18 . 8/7/2013
Really loved this story. It was so fun to read. The pace was excellent. The characters lots of fun with just the right amount of angst. Thanks for sharing and thanks for leaving it on FF. :)
BridieM chapter 10 . 8/7/2013
Oh gee. I'm all a flutter. Lol. :)
BridieM chapter 9 . 8/7/2013
This story is so much fun. :)
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