|Reviews for Not Partners Anymore|
| Athena13 chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
| unknown chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
i like it i think u should add another chapter about how they act around each other after this
| StarvingScriptWriter chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
You're right in that there are a great deal of wrap ups out there to this particular episode. I did one myself, so I understand the compulsion. But you pulled this off flawlessly. The anguish comes through, along with the UST - still unresolved even at the end. Though many of us (myself included) went ahead & wrote about the two actually coming together finally - I think in the context of the show that your version is much more realistic to how it would play out. Both are very strong characters, and you've managed to capture their voices flawlessly.
Well Done! Bravo!
| NCISchick chapter 1 . 1/21/2009
that was a really gd story, im not the biggest Tiva fan (at all) up still enjoyed it.
Love NCISchick xoxo
| Silvergrass chapter 1 . 1/20/2009
aw how sad
| tayababy chapter 1 . 1/18/2009
in my opinion it was pretty original. in every other one like that they slept together...
| Alex.n.Jo.DiNozzo.n.Faz.Cullen chapter 1 . 1/1/2009
HOMG...I'm in tears...this is so sad...don't you dare take it off the site...
| j93a95 chapter 1 . 12/31/2008
This was a great story. We need a sequel please.
| Sarah chapter 1 . 12/31/2008
As good as any other that I have read.
| leganos chapter 1 . 12/30/2008
It's very, very, good. Do not take it down. In fact, I would put this in a hall of fame somewhere.
| NickTonyK chapter 1 . 12/30/2008
Actually, it was really good! I could actually see something like that taking place. I hope you have more Tony episodes soon!
| Obsessed Pam chapter 1 . 12/30/2008
'...take it off the website...'? Are you mad? This was pure passionate perfection!
| samleigh chapter 1 . 12/29/2008
so sad. very good.
| crokettsgirl chapter 1 . 12/29/2008
This was fantastic. A question I always asked and I think a few people touched on it and I put it in my reviews. About Tony's doubt, his drinking and why he didn't call her or she , him. I think you did a terrific job describing their feelings, showing them. The pain, guilt and longing. I wish this wasn't a one shot and you'd continue it a bit more. How Tony gets out of the guilt and drinking, he obviously did still drink on the ship when they spoke in Agent Afloat. But I'd love to see what they both go through, how they come home and she helps him over the guilt and drinking himself silly, well he slowed down a bit, had to. And finally how this all brings them together...so no, it's not over done...I think this would be a great analysis of both of them...but that's just my thoughts, you did such a brilliant job with it. Sequel? Sue
| M E Wofford chapter 1 . 12/29/2008
It's good but so sad.
Why can't they ever be happy?