|Reviews for A Pair of Phoenixes|
| anna chapter 7 . 3/29
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/18/2013
nice one interesting
| craizypet chapter 7 . 11/8/2011
another great one! the same sort of lines as slave child. do you think you could do a one shot into some of the scenes mentioned? maybe some reaction shots when harry first found out, or a little scene when he and snape began to get along?
| Reader-anonymous-writer chapter 7 . 3/24/2011
1. How could a slavery spell be deemed necessary? Why?
2. Why is the book called "A Pair of Phoenixes"? Because both persons tried to kill themselves and stopped each other?
3. I thought so, too, that Harry can see everything outside, but cannot move, interact, because any interaction would bring up the problems of slavery spell again, and he would have to either endure pity or attempt suicide again. Harry just couldn't bear life as a slave, and he had seen how everybody didn't want him to attempt suicide again. It has taken Severus's attempt to poison himself to break thick glass between Harry and the outer world.
I would hope that there is a way to break slavery spell in the future.
4. Will Severus's letters be delivered? If yes, it's bound to be a bitter-sweet reunion soon.;)
Thanks! No need to update unless you want to.
| soratanaka chapter 7 . 1/3/2011
... I'm crying. And I actually saw quite a few horrible scenarios in my head in the middle of this last chapter.
I started to read SC a while ago, and it was an awesome story. I actually put it into my alerts. But then I forgot where I was, I had other stuff to do, and when I couldn't quite follow the story I just quit reading it. I always do, no matter story, book or anything. This was some kind of a reminder, however, and I believe I'll have to read through SC once again. It's totally worth it, and with you as an author..
My heart's still aching from all the stuff they shared with each other. Now I'll have to go and sleep, so I'll just end my review here.
Btw, this was the last chapter, yes? Or else I'll just have to alert it. Please send me a notice whether it's completed or not!
| AliceInCrazyland15 chapter 7 . 12/27/2010
Awwww. I like this different spin on harry being a slave, I can see some similaries with SC but this is definatly its own story. I will not hunt you down in order to get another chapter/update for this story... but I would love one ) and I am not above begging either.
| HeidiFox chapter 7 . 12/26/2010
Oh god, you had me practically sobbing and actually had to dig out a box of tissues! Then Cancer by My Chemical Romance played while I was reading and I needed to stop! I haven't cried for so very long...I need some fluff...
| Olaf74 chapter 7 . 3/30/2010
*removes his Jaw from the floor*
You are full of surprises! In the positive turn i mean.
Please continue the story very very soon.
| Renks chapter 7 . 1/18/2010
| ceara1888 chapter 7 . 10/23/2009
wow, will you be continuing this one still?
| pammiez x3 chapter 7 . 10/9/2009
i really like this story, hope you update!
| SnapeAngel chapter 7 . 9/16/2009
lovely story, this chapter might be a mush fest but if it wasn't then you wouldn't have cought the human condition so well that you are showing in this story
please update soon..awsome story
| SnapeAngel chapter 4 . 9/16/2009
that sly slytherin severus..ministry paying for the villa..nice!
so sad that harry is siting there catatonic :(
| Phoenix80hp chapter 7 . 9/8/2009
I love all of the drama in this story! I am rather happy that Harry finally woke up from his shock and hopefully now Severus and him get to live happily, however I am curious if this story is over or will there be more?
| loretta537 chapter 7 . 8/10/2009
this is great, i cant wait to see how they fix things.