Reviews for Total Endurance: Mt Everest
KaiTO1412KiD chapter 14 . 1/7/2009
AH!My heart!Oh man the suspense is destroying me!Please update!*-*(I'm getting tired of that symbol...)

GonardWithTheTDL chapter 14 . 1/7/2009
alright i am so awesome great chapter and guess what i am really GONARD!1 haah didnt see that comeing im gonna switch back ahahahahaa
Blond with a brain chapter 14 . 1/7/2009
I'd choose Orange! They're very sneaky! but I dont feel comfterblle NOT choosing purple! I have a feeling it would come back to haunt me!
Calliecatt93 chapter 14 . 1/7/2009
Ah, so suspenseful! Who's being sent? I hope it's not Yellow. Great job dude!
shockcollar chapter 13 . 1/6/2009
Keep the good writing up! Lurv Lurv Lurv it!

And somebody lurvs Kabran...lolz awesome

Can't wait till the next chapter..which will be soon?

lolz I hope so, even though yuo can't curz of school, I understand!

It uscks though doesn't it!

Well can't wait till next one...


O btw'


how ish u? oober swell I hopes?
ihavealife chapter 13 . 1/6/2009

i cant wait until karma finds out about her broither's little crush.

also, my computer is being stupid and i cant find your website anymore.

what was the link again?
GonardWithTheTDL chapter 13 . 1/6/2009
haha dude i think im first to read this so ill be first to say it and im laughing you wrote REX instead of AARON ahahahaa
RandomRex6 chapter 13 . 1/6/2009
Wow, these relationships are getting a little dirty...

You said 'Rex' instead of Aaron a couple of times, but overall good stuff.

P.S. Please ask Gonard with the TDI to stop making comments about the chicken picture. It was amusing once or twice, but now it's just getting kind of stale.
Calliecatt93 chapter 13 . 1/6/2009
Yay Update! As always the chapter is awesome! Can't wait for more and go Yellow Team! Mark and Ciria are so gonna kick butt!
Blond with a brain chapter 13 . 1/6/2009
The scene switches to the Blue Team’s Igloo.

“Hey, have you seen my thong?” Lauren asks looking through the whole place.

“No…” Steve says blushing.


“Dude… she’s wearing a mini today! Hot…” Steve say’s blushing.

End of confessional.

She bends over, right where his face is.

“Found it?” she asks.


She comes up with a purple laced bra.

“Oh, I was looking for this!” She says happy. She notices Steve starring. “You ok?” she asks.

“Totally…” he answers.


“WHEN THE HELL WILL HE TAKE THE HINT?” Lauren shouts at the camera.


OMG! I thought they were just taking it steady and Lauren we dont need to wave our undies in his face! Dont worry lauren he'll figure it out! ;)
ihavealife chapter 12 . 1/4/2009
soo.. is red out for good?

LOLOL. this is hilarious and awesome.

i really like how your doing karma and vince.

like.. a lot!

keep writing D
ihavealife chapter 8 . 1/4/2009
i thought aaron caught the red ball?

haha im so confused.

who's on the red team then?
GonardWithTheTDL chapter 11 . 1/4/2009
i like the orange team cuz you know they are good with animals cuz aaron was talking to a chicken so he must be good with animals
shockcollar chapter 12 . 1/4/2009
very good chapter! although i really don't want grey to go home...that would be oober sadness :(

Can't wait til the next chapter, maybe you'll include some more people (hint hint0)

Lazy Awesome Ninja chapter 11 . 1/4/2009
I dont really trust Orange team. I can tell when someone is lying, and it looked like that skill came in handy. Anyway, I'm sorry Orange Team that everyone seems to be against you.
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