|Reviews for Hot Dogs|
| Vanessa Osbourne chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
O_o Crypto is beginning to scare me...alot...XD
Nice! I could totally see him acting like this!
While this was quite interesting, you changed from past-tense to present tense, which is something you should try avoiding. You also spelled "special" as "specail" (I could see that as a typo, though.) And by "or just plan Crypto..." I think you mean "or just plain Crypto..." Eh, they're just a few mistakes. :P It happens.
Anyway, this was pretty interesting. Nice job keeping the characters in...character. XD
| Veraden chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
Well, if you CAN beat 'em, EAT 'em!
| grr580 chapter 1 . 6/9/2009
not only was that extramly funny but i can really see crypto and pox acting like that
| DARKENING SHADOWS chapter 1 . 4/14/2009
| Invader Jay chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
Hehe... He ate Ponsonby... hehe...
| Marcipie chapter 1 . 1/17/2009
That sounds like something Crypto would do.
Talk to the hotdogs. lawl. I love the Furon, I gotta say.
| manxscrubsnut chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
liked this a lot!
best game ever... meteor strikes rule...
er the guns u mention only appeared in the 2nd game, not the first 1... just a minor point