Reviews for Midnight Snack
Sayuri Lapis chapter 1 . 11/20/2013
oh my how lovely
Hope chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
Loved it, you should add on to it!
nekogirl017 chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
Too short.
claraowl chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
WOW.

So ice cream fanfics midnight good fics for you, too?
Sakura chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
You must continue this one 8D
LuckyTurtle chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
Okay normally I try not to read fanfics that are M rated, 'cause I'm pretty young, but I just had a feeling that I should click on this one...so I did.

And I have to say, you're writing is REALLY good. It's probably almost TOO good 'cause I absolutely adore this fic and it isn't exactly the most innocent story -.- haha
Akariiiin chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
MAKE THIS A COLLECTION OF LIMES D: IM ADDICTED TO THIS OKAY THANKS ;_;
Akariiiin chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
MAKE THIS A COLLECTION OF LIMES D: IM ADDICTED TO THIS OKAY THANKS ;_;
Fabulous as FCUK chapter 1 . 7/3/2011
Love it.

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SoulsInk chapter 1 . 5/22/2011
I loved this fanfiction, I also liked how you kept amu her true age. Im not saying it out of pervyness, but it feels more like shugo chara when ikuto is older and amu is still the runt. Awsome job!
bubblyimperfection 9 5 chapter 1 . 12/23/2010
that was really good DD and i get what you were saying about changing ages xPP haha i actually don't really care if they're 5 years apart i still think they're really cute together! xDDDD better than that Tadagay! xPP
happy bunny chapter 1 . 12/11/2010
that was really good
Nessie-san chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
OMFG! This was WONDERFUL, Uchiha-san! This sounds just like the type of thing that Ikuto would do. Also, I agree with you to a point that making them both THE SAME AGE is annoying. However, I think that if you keep the age difference the same (five years) but make them both adults, or at least both older, then it's fine. Now, technical review: Nothing. I found not a single mistake in this whole thing. That's really good. I usually find SOMETHING, but in this story I didn't find anything. (However, I'm not an english major, so I probably missed something.) I really loved your story, however I would have loved to see the whole thing that came before it. You talked in the beginning about how it had all started, and I would have loved to see that story evolve into this scene, and see where they went after this scene. What happened when they finally did have sex? What happened to Amu's life outside of these visits because of her relationship with Ikuto? What happened with Tadase? I think you should think about writing the prequel and the sequel to this story, turning it into a full fledged drama. After reading a few of your stories, I'm sure you have the talent and mental capacity to do that. Again, wonderful, and I'm adding you and this story to my favorites and my subscriptions.
amutolover34268 chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
hahaah hiya u should def rite a nother chapie to this story plzzzzzzzzzzz come on * hug * i hugged u plz plz plz plz plz plz hahah btw i like strawberry fudge icecream hahaha
dragonflyer30 chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
Awwww amu why do u hav to like tadagay ... But i liked ur story
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