Reviews for Selfish
estelle.evenstar72 chapter 1 . 10/9/2009
This is awesome. Second person can be tedious, but you've used it to great effect, and also used the description sparingly. Great work :D
Janna18 chapter 1 . 9/11/2009

Pls write more stories!
GarrulousGibberish chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
I liked it! Good job!
medicgirl chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
Nice! This is the first Batman fic I've read. To be honest, I never thought about it. I stumbled onto it through your Twilight fic, and I am impressed,
Theodore Hawkwood chapter 1 . 12/29/2008
Powerful story my friend. I really loved the angst in the work. Not overdone, not melodramatic, but definitely well stated and well written.

I would say this is a prose version of a favorite Edgar Allan Poe poem of mine, Annabel Lee, and I definitely think Rachel makes a wonderful substitute for Poe's muse in this one.

Nice touch with the second person, btw and it only adds to the effect.


Theodore Hawkwood