Reviews for Until You're Mine
MessintheMirror chapter 32 . 5/28/2009
OH MY GOD! I know it was going to happen, just didnt realize that it was going to happen so soon! I thought I still had sometime! lol...what an awesome chapter. Glad to see everyone happy for a little bit at least. Carlisle is ok with the move and Alice & Jake will be living with them? Didnt see Jake living with Jasper but its still awesome! So excited for whats to come! Love this story!
xoKellyAnneexo chapter 32 . 5/28/2009
oh god oh god oh god!

the suspense!

you're killing me woman!
snoodles chapter 32 . 5/27/2009
How could you let this happen. Everything was fallinf in place. I hope that Jasper has the willpower to change her. I do believe that life or death could overstep the treaty.
Haley Cullen- The Vampire Girl chapter 32 . 5/27/2009
Lati08 chapter 32 . 5/27/2009
*tears* OMG NO!

Look see I reviewed now update UPDATE UPDATE
Simply Lissa chapter 32 . 5/27/2009

I can't believe you let us hangin' there !

I tought they were going to be all happy and stuff and then this happens !

It't truly unbelieveble.

But it was a really great chapter

Sinisterly yours & lots of love,


polarmayden chapter 32 . 5/27/2009
AH! No you can't kill Natalia off, I think I am going to cry! Very well written and I am happy that Carlisle changed his mind, but now I think it was in vain. Can't wait to read more! :)
jaz chapter 32 . 5/26/2009
CLIFFHANGER! Really? That's so not nice.
jaz chapter 32 . 5/26/2009
CLIFFHANGER! Really? That's so not nice.
twilightchica17 chapter 32 . 5/26/2009
OH MY GOSH! I WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT! she has to be ok. he cant go on wihtout her. if shes ok this might ruin thier plans a bit. ugh...that was awesome!
liljenrocks chapter 32 . 5/26/2009
I'm going nuts trying to figure out what happened! Update ASAP!
Simply Lissa chapter 31 . 5/22/2009
I started reading your story with a ot of doubts.

Because I personally am a great fan of jasper/alice.

But I must say, your story is really great.

All my doubts melted away once I started reading.

So I hope you post your next chapter really soon.

Sinisterly yours,


Haley Cullen- The Vampire Girl chapter 31 . 5/18/2009
WOAH...Please update soon!
xoKellyAnneexo chapter 31 . 5/18/2009
oh dangit carlisle!


wow, you got me mad at carlisle!

that never happens! lol.

anyways, amazing chapter.

so well written(:
Moirailis chapter 31 . 5/18/2009
Uh-oh... Natalia and Jasper have been CAUGHT! o.o Surprising that Edward didn't yell...

Update soon~!
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