|Reviews for After the Argument|
| Doni chapter 2 . 12/23/2011
I enjoyed the first version for it's humor, bit setting the scene was so much hotter. Incredible job.
| Doni chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
That was absolutely hilarious and I cod picture the whole thing.
| Janto.CP.writer chapter 2 . 12/21/2009
I love the way you wrote this. The strangest part is that I almost word for word filled in part 2. LOL Keep up the good work.
| I'm-not-here-HONEST chapter 2 . 9/9/2009
why the hell were you so worried idiot! That really wasn't half bad. Maybe some of it was a little jerky coz the really short sentances stopped it flowing a bit and you're right when you say you don't add much detail but I've read much worse! I think with a bit more practise you'll be better coz its slightly obvious that you were a little embarrassed when you wrote it but it doesn't matter too much.
I am not repeating this in person or on MSN btw!
| Danny Rose chapter 2 . 5/24/2009
Aw, totally adorable.
If it possible to have cute sex?
YEs, it has just been acheived.
Really good, totally love it.
I like the way the second chapter expanded the first.
| Danny Rose chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
Aw that is so so so so so so cute.
and sort of angsty...
I love the fact you know EXACTLY what is going on, even with naration and just dialogue.
You should try script writing, I recon you'll be good at it.
| captainme chapter 1 . 4/27/2009
LMAO! That. Was. BRILLIANT!
| Slytherin'sNotebook chapter 1 . 1/1/2009
had me in stitches - funny thing is - i can see them having this convo lol
| Candybree chapter 2 . 12/31/2008
I love how hard Ianto was fighting against Jack and how hard Jack was willing to work to get Ianto to stop being mad.
Keep p the great work!
| Kuro Mitsu chapter 2 . 12/30/2008
This has to be one of the absolute best Jack/Ianto stories I've ever read! Simply fantastic!_