Reviews for Relationship Vignettes
csimesser1 chapter 1 . 9/6/2010
that was great loved it
mabelreid chapter 1 . 1/3/2009
This is a very honest look into the hidden moments that the show refuses to show us about this pairing.

My favorite was the last one. I like to think that this is what happened after he talked to the Harris's. Thanks for this look through the window at a very complex couple.
afrozenheart412 chapter 1 . 12/31/2008
Section 1

You could feel the awkwardness and hurt between Danny and Lindsay. I'm glad it was Flack who tried to help Lindsay get over Danny. Since he was the one she turned to help Danny out. Also, it was nice to see Flack upset at Danny, for all the times they tried to help him and were rejected because of it. My favorite line here is "Time to let the part of her that was once Danny’s die its slow, painful death."

Section 2

Danny's frustration with the situation in this wonderful and a little bit funny. My favorite line "But he quickly knew that wouldn’t help. He’d gone down that road before, chasing the empty promise of nothingness, and look where it got him. Sitting on his couch, alone, watching bad porn." I hope we get flashbacks to this scene in the show.

Section 3

Hope for a new beginning. Danny letting Lindsay know that he knows he screwed up but he was going to be there and he won't leave again. With Lindsay slowing opening up again to him. :)

Section 4

There is so much healing shown in this paragraph. I like how you added how shy and nervous they were, making love for the first time again. My favorites are where he was tracing words of love into her skin and him wearing her warmth like a blanket. Super squee!
daytimedrama chapter 1 . 12/30/2008
Loved all of these. Thanks so much for sharing your "deleted scenes".
hickyroo chapter 1 . 12/30/2008
That was great! Loved it! In fact, I love your stories, they all have a high degree of Loving Tender and Care. PURE TLC. I am adding you to my author alert, fact.
McMackenzie chapter 1 . 12/30/2008
That was really good.
GRACE5 chapter 1 . 12/30/2008
awesome, i loved it.