|Reviews for Second Heartbeat|
| Guest chapter 53 . 4/19
Arrrrggh fbhgyokhgdydgyg rooooy noo why did you kill yourself this ending is so sad dies thank you for writing sobs loudly
| incarnate of evil chapter 34 . 4/23/2014
On the assumption that Ira is actually only about 2 weeks old, Ed has no will power which seems really ooc for him. He is giving in to everything with Roy far too quickly, and considering what he was acting like on the way to the hospital calling for Ira I doubt he would be willing to leave him on his own already letting someone check on him he has known for about a week.
Just my opinion though.
| incarnate of evil chapter 29 . 4/22/2014
Just me again... are you British or American? So far I think you are a strange hybrid! Using £ and the word trousers leads me to believe British but you have now used cell phone which is very American?!
Also a quick note while I ponder your nationality, I have never known a mobile phone to last over a week without needing to be charged even when it is never used. Surely he also should have found this sooner, he must have changed clothes at some point especially as he is trying to change his appearance?!
| incarnate of evil chapter 27 . 4/22/2014
Bit confused, Ed has suddenly had 2 very different hair styles and personality changes in 2 chapters. If he is going to create a new persona surely he should stick too one? Just thought I would also say if he was trying to stay unknown surely inviting Roy back was a huge mistake?
Just picking holes, don't take offence I don't mean it in a nasty way just miffed.
| incarnate of evil chapter 10 . 4/19/2014
Just have to say they would not do an mri. The m stands for magnetic so that would not be good for someone with automail! Anyway just saying before I read the next chapter! :)
| FMAsonlyAlice chapter 34 . 4/2/2013
Does Ira have a bigger dick than Roy expected of a person that appears to be 10yrs old?
| FMAsonlyAlice chapter 20 . 4/2/2013
Well, I do hope you plan on healing his face...
| FMAsonlyAlice chapter 5 . 4/1/2013
If he's not with Winry, why does it matter if she knew at all?
| FMAsonlyAlice chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
It's gonna tear its way out like on Alien
| Lyson chapter 4 . 1/15/2013
Congrats, you've just freaked the shit out of me. I shall venture no further.
| Guest chapter 46 . 9/7/2012
| Guest chapter 37 . 9/6/2012
*something* Grande, The Iron-Blood Alchemist...
Why the hell am I still reading this story...? O-o
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/6/2012
| The 14th Undertaker chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
I think it's hilarious how she said, 'the MOTHER'.
| BeyondIsTheName chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
I love this story