yeah is was all good and all but genma was unnecessary typical lame forced love triangle annoying ass hell anything for lame drama I guess

I can't remember ever felling so much emotion in the first chapter so excited to read this

HOLLY SHIZZ BUCKETTSS THAT WAS AMAZING! FAVORITE FAVORITE FAVORITE! i pray to god there is a sequel somewhere! dear kami i feel blessed to have read it is now officially my favorite fnafiction for naruto!

This is so beautiful i'm crying... :"
Great work! I love it! You should update conceiveing with you tho

OHMYGOD ANOTHER SHOWER?! DOES THAT MEANS HE WAS TURNED ON OMG

This was fuckin awesome ! but seriously great character development i wasn't expecting Genma to confess... And Sai omg!
I absolutely Loved Naruto in this he wasn't so goofy n that I Loved :)
I also loved the part where they were hiding in the store :)
GREAT JOB

yeay! i'm happy that Genma woke up :) i really hope there will be a sequel, i just loved this story! so are they still linked?

You wrapped this up with a perfect little metaphorical ribbon. I just can't believe how emotional I get when I read your work. I'm blown away-as usual- and I am so grateful that you take time out of your obviously hectic schedule to write such amazing fics. You are awesome and so so soooo talented. Thank you!

Screw what I said about liking the chip on his shoulder. Sasuke is demoted. Kakashi's my new favorite. I'm so frustrated that I'm going to try to find some bubble wrap and take a 10 minute break.

"I wanted you to know that...you were the last thing on my mind."

I love the way you build the characters up throughout your story. It's so subtle you hardly notice the change. If Sasuke had said that in chapter 2, I would have thought, "Pfft.. yeah right...like that would ever happen." Sasuke is not sasuke without the dark, brooding attitude and overall massive chip on his shoulder. You've maintained that image perfectly while still allowing him to confess something like that without seeming completely out of character. I'm very impressed.

"I have no regrets...but we went wrong somewhere."

I re-read that line like a dozen times...oh the feels.
Wonderful chapter! Love this story so far!

Sarcastic Sakura is my favorite. :)

This story is so beautifully written. The plot is really good and different from everything i've read so far.
:) Good job :)

Man damn that Genma he has to ruin everything… I mean I get that they are trying to protect her, but maybe they should let her make the decision herself.

This story is amazing. You have done a really good job with it. :) I can't wait to find out what happens next. Also the Sai part was a bit creepy. I can't help but think that he is involved in the attack somehow.