|Reviews for Fidelius|
| Silvers45 chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
Eeeee! I'm so glad for this. I hate it when people make Ron out to be some heartless traitor, because honestly, he's no such thing! This was much better. A really good short story. Brilliant!
| GenJordan chapter 1 . 10/15/2013
Lovely story, thanks for writing and posting!
| Random number generator chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
It would be far better without gloating and conversation with a villain.
| A ShrinkinG VIOLET GIrL chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
| Ashen Author chapter 1 . 4/11/2013
Brilliant plot twist. You summed up a year of story in a few minutes.
| Alyssa Halliwell chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
Oh I loved this, so much. Not usually a fan of 1st person, but it worked really well here
Especially liked the ending - "surprise"
| Caveat Lector 52 chapter 1 . 3/18/2013
What an awesome way to subvert Ron the Death Eater!
| Beyogi chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
Surprise indeed... Ron the deatheater subverted.
Thank you for writing this interesting story,
| TroyWeb chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
I had a laugh at Voldemort being tricked in the end. Ron should have used a fake chicken wand.
Keep up the good work.
| DanielLC chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
Harry really needs to learn how to do this right.
Step one: Kill your opponent.
Step two: Kill him again, just to be sure.
Step three: Gloat.
| xX-T-luv-Xx chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
| ProlifeJesusFreakWriterGal chapter 1 . 11/23/2011
Wow. This is great! I hate Ron, but I knew he would NEVER betray Harry, ever. I waa going to complain about it for a year, but then you made it perfect and had it be a trap for Voldermort.
| sammyfish chapter 1 . 5/29/2011
Your writing is amazing. You can capture such a powerful emotion so easily, creating beautiful snapshots. Well done, once again :)
| Bagoosa chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
You could do so much more with this, tell so much more about it.
It was good. I liked the ending the most. "Surprise."
| somethingwithatail chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
Creative and I like the pro-Ron. All the Ron bashing on this site gets tiring after awhile. It's good to see someone who does believe in him and his loyalty to Harry. Good idea to trick Voldy too. Nice job.