Reviews for Fidelius
TippyToe Zombie chapter 1 . 4/2/2015
This was brilliant.
KingOsiris chapter 1 . 3/26/2015
Loved it
A different take on friendship and loyalty
Guest chapter 1 . 12/29/2014
Intense! And brilliant! :)
Guest chapter 1 . 7/14/2014
amaaazing 3 absolutely love this story
read it before & had to reread it.
love your summary as well
gr8 work :)
Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 3/23/2014
julesdap chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
Eeeee! I'm so glad for this. I hate it when people make Ron out to be some heartless traitor, because honestly, he's no such thing! This was much better. A really good short story. Brilliant!
GenJordan chapter 1 . 10/15/2013
Lovely story, thanks for writing and posting!
Random number generator chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
It would be far better without gloating and conversation with a villain.
A ShrinkinG VIOLET GIrL chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
No way!
Ashen Author chapter 1 . 4/11/2013
Brilliant plot twist. You summed up a year of story in a few minutes.
Alyssa Halliwell chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
Oh I loved this, so much. Not usually a fan of 1st person, but it worked really well here

Especially liked the ending - "surprise"
Caveat Lector 52 chapter 1 . 3/18/2013
What an awesome way to subvert Ron the Death Eater!
Beyogi chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
Surprise indeed... Ron the deatheater subverted.

Thank you for writing this interesting story,
TroyWeb chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
I had a laugh at Voldemort being tricked in the end. Ron should have used a fake chicken wand.

Keep up the good work.
DanielLC chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
Harry really needs to learn how to do this right.

Step one: Kill your opponent.
Step two: Kill him again, just to be sure.
Step three: Gloat.
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