Reviews for Guilty Pleasures
Charles chapter 25 . 5/15
Best fan fic ever
XD chapter 1 . 3/24/2015
you're a great writer. this is so beautiful. i could feel the love between them XD
Guest chapter 25 . 2/1/2015
Its so good i love it omg
meow mix chapter 2 . 9/24/2014
I don't really like Sep with Jenna, but other than that I like what you've been writing so far!
keep up the good work! :D
Nikki chapter 25 . 4/30/2014
TheNinaTales chapter 25 . 7/25/2013
I loved this story! It was super creative and my jaw was dropped the whole time! Thanks for sharing it and finishing it, - N. D.
juju chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
This is some of the best writing I have seen on fanfictiction for a very long time!
njdaphne chapter 4 . 6/17/2013
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhh
joey chapter 25 . 3/20/2013
omg i cant believe this is your first fanfic! it was amazing the best fanfic i hav ever read amd i love it even more each time i read it! thanks for writing it i loved reading your fanfics!
Guest chapter 25 . 12/6/2012
If you weren't gonna end the story as Septimus and Jenna you should have put this story in the Jenna and Beetle category
Guest chapter 1 . 11/8/2012
OMG! I loved it! I'm so glad you decided to put this up! It's awesome!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
Your SO mean... WHY must make a cliffy?!

P.S, LOVE this so far! :D
Mabel Lane Fox chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
I’m not entirely sure how well you’ll remember me; we exchanged a lot of emails and had some rather long and quite deep conversations. Although to be fair it would have been a year ago and then some. But coming for someone who you used to sort of know, I’m really pleased that you’ve re-posted this story; and not just for the content either, but more that I think, or guess, that it means that you’ve made peace with these stories and the point in your life that you were writing them. From the sincerest depths of my heart, I wish you happiness and that fortune smiles upon you in the years ahead. And my words here aren’t ramblings of a stranger, but rather from someone who at one point, albeit some time ago, you were ‘internet friends’ with. This sounds far more convoluted in the retelling .

And onto the story review:

First things first, I could never quite get over how good this story was when I read it the first time; purely because you said at the start it was your first fanfic. And I understand that the basis for writing an epic story comes from natural talent or ‘flare if you’re inclined to refer to it as such, and that I know that you have in plentiful supply. Still I marvel that you wrote something like this on what was proverbially your first shot at writing fanfic. Now you’re such a prolific author on here, that it’s hard to imagine you having but one story to your name…

If I speak entirely truthfully, it’s been such an incredibly long time since I read this the first (second, third and fourth XD) time that I doubt I’m entirely picking up on the subtly changes that you’ve made. Though by no means is your hard work wasted, I’m greatly enjoying re-reading this and the edits you’ve made are no doubt enhancing the reading experience :D You’ve got a way of writing that makes it easy to read. So many stories on here, as well as some published novels, have such clunky expression and everything seems unnatural and forced; like the words have been shoved together into an uncooperative order and been told ‘Oi, make sense’ (think Fifty Shades Of Grey, oh how I loathe that book). You get my drift right? Of course you do Anyway, your sentences just flow of their own accord. The words intertwine to make sentences and in turn they interlock to form paragraphs; everything is so natural, almost as though someone is actually animatedly telling the story to the audience. Suspension of disbelief is immediate and instinctive and the written word, which so often loses the truth of a narrative, is so much more than just that. Of course I now speak of your work in general and not just this piece, though this is where my love for your stories began.

I fear I cannot entirely comment on the plot as yet. You’ve made some plot changes further down the line, no? Well till I reach that point, I must confess that I cannot claim not to know of the overall outcome; unless of course you’ve made more than a few minor plot twists. But despite this, it has been such a long time since I’ve read these words that I find myself being caught up with the excitement that comes when discovering a marvellous story on here for the first time. You know that feeling when all the hours of sifting through some the silt and mud on here and you finally find the ruby that you’ve been searching tirelessly for? That feeling is returning to me now, and I sit here expectantly and hyped up to read the following chapters. Regrettably though, time is against me as I depart for Spain tomorrow and therefore I doubt I’ll feasibly be able to read much more of this what with packing and final preparations to make haste with. Still when I return home to dreary England and the holiday blues come knocking, I’ll have something to lift my spirits and can look forward to having this waiting on fanfic for me.

This review has gone on entirely too long I think, and I apologise for that; can’t promise that I won’t babble and babble and babble when I review the next chapters though I’m afraid. I just have far too much to say; though I remember you telling me that you do like long and thorough reviews so hopefully this is just right
All the best to you, and don’t be a stranger ya hear . It might be nice to maybe chat sometime on here, catch up a lil’ bit? Of course if you don’t remember me all too well then feel free to tell me to find someone else to creep on :D


Elly x
Jenna Heap chapter 25 . 7/20/2012
Hi! I'm Rose Dawson-Johanna Mason on FanFiction, just too lazy too log in! I just read this whole story and I LOVED it! I'm a bit sad that Jenna and Septimus didn't end up together, but I still really liked this story!
khalesxi chapter 25 . 7/21/2012
This is such an amazing story! I felt like I was reading a sequel to Syren, rather than just a fanfiction!
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