Reviews for Naughty or Nice
idancewithvamps chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
normally three/foursomes are just sick and twisted. but his was actually written very well and it was hot. not what i expected at all!
Ms.KCullen chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
I'm speechless. Wow. Wasn't that something. I read Arrogance and I wanted check your stories out. Boy, was I surprised. I really liked this lemon. You and Ashel should king and queen of lemons. No joke. Peace. Love. Twilight
cece chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
That was a...interisting story. Oh who the hell am i kidding. that story was strange but good at the same time. i think it is the best story withe Edward and Bella in it that i have ever read. and i've read a lot of storys here.
kayleigh24 chapter 1 . 4/11/2009


sam chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
Okay very wierd and r u mental of hav u some other strange explalation of how u thought this up
T1nkerbell9598 chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
pretty hot
Jasper's Singer chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
OH GOD! That was HOT!
writergirl135 chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
wow! i am speechless. definitely loved it. must add it to favorites now! :-D
sanctuary-in-dreams chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
Ha...No matter how many times I read this, I never cease to be turned on. I loved this one...:)

Just gotta love the ever popular, but totally unreachable (to most people, anyways) foursome. And who DOESN'T like to read (or watch, the nasty pervs) four gorgeous people go at it together? I know I don't! XD

Well, this is one way to get into the Christmas spirit! While other people prefer to lick the cookie dough off a spoon, Bella likes to lick it off Edward's hard dick. And while some people like to lick candy-canes, Ali likes to lick it off a condom that's wrapped around Jazz's penis. Well. To each there own! ;)

Great job, Hay! I'm lovin' it!

Sid B.
frankytory chapter 1 . 1/25/2009
Ah all I can say is… well wow! And are you bisexual? Because I never in my wildest dreams expected that! I am not sure what I think yet lol

I still love your writing though… even though this story was definitely different!
HangTogetherOrHangSeperate chapter 1 . 1/15/2009

that was so great! please do another like it!
Oriana de la Rose chapter 1 . 1/11/2009 was some serious kinky sex. But in a good way.

*fanning herself*

That was HOT.
goldenrose37 chapter 1 . 1/9/2009
That was hot.
sweetmahogany chapter 1 . 1/4/2009
Damn that was some kinky sex! Great story!
latuacantante4him chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
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