Reviews for A Different Kind of Dazzling
Guest chapter 20 . 1/11
It is not sad that this is over. In fact it is the best part of this waste of time.
Woops chapter 19 . 1/11
Oh my god does this trainwreck SUCK or what?! did you do this for fourth grade essay?
This isnt just terrible its ...I dont even have words to describe what a crapfest this is.
Jake just satnds there and lets dedward threaten him. you have turned Bella into a twisted diseased freak. I mean she was bad but she is truly worthless here. Dedward kidnaps her and she is entertaining the thought of staying. She needs an institution in your world. You just need to accept that as a writer you are not very good.
If you want to really hurt your brain then read this. If you want a worse than usual sick, selfish truly twisted minded Bella read this. A bella who is a coward. Read this. A bella who likes to be abused , mistreated, manipulated. Really really likes it! A jake who is a silly gutless wonder who is so toitally mischaracterized? read this. If you want a compplete and total mess read this.
Guest chapter 18 . 1/11
You ..uh ...NEED to change... a lot of stuff. Does Bella have abused woman syndrome? the more the other person abuses the more the female thinks she is loved and thinks she loves the other person? I think Bella has brain damage. what a sick soul less thing Bella is!
Guest chapter 17 . 1/11
Bella is too fucking stupid too despise the corpse. He kidnaps her against her wishes, disregards her opinion, makes fun of her intelligence, belittles her judgement - its but a minor annoyance. Bella barley has enough brain power to move one foot in front of another. Of course she will want jake to just suck it up since its HIM. Maybe jake will get a clue and accidentally rip Bellas head off. Its lousy stories like this that make the fandom tedious and cliche. All the reader gets is the same story over nd over and over. Unless bella has had an aneurysm, she should be able to get that she should despise that reanimate sack of meat.
Roshimon chapter 1 . 1/11
There are only oh maybe 50 or 60 other fics that start like this. Most of them suck.
Bella is of course right on track for being the selfish coward she usually is. A deluded liar who wanted desperately the escape from life on its own terms that the corpse could give her. Nothing about the corpse was good for her. she was controlled, manipulated and deceived by dedward. She couldnt even begin to be herself. Dedward treated her like a pet doggy that crapped on the floor., alice treated her like a dress up doll. Jake? Well he scared her the most. Jake could leave or imprint or stop loving her. Jake was risk. No sure thing like with dedward. Bella is human trash
4Gracie04 chapter 18 . 12/4/2014
Good for you for standing up for your Christian values!
badgirl chapter 8 . 11/2/2014
Wow this is a cool! Fanfiction
April-Showers82 chapter 20 . 8/23/2014
I really enjoyed your story. I liked the plot and you kept all of them in character. It was really enjoyable to see Bella acknowledge her feelings but choose to be with the better man. Keep up the good work.
WallWatcher33 chapter 7 . 11/21/2013
(sighs longingly)
Oh, Jake...my Jakey...
My Jakey and my Remmy...
Whitlock.Mason.McCarty.Cullen chapter 2 . 4/8/2013
This is really sweet :) I like your writing, it has a nice tone to it
beckylovestwilight chapter 20 . 7/26/2011
love it xxxx
LivingLikeLarry chapter 20 . 7/24/2011
Adorable! Ur a great writer! Keep it up!:)))))))
Chaotic Courtney chapter 20 . 7/8/2011
Awww! One of the best Twilight, well JxB fanfictions out there. I loved the whole thing!
VampireandWerewolfLover22 chapter 20 . 4/11/2011
Well done! Thanks and good luck for the future!
ThisRandomPerson chapter 2 . 3/19/2011
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