Reviews for Symbiotic Uzumaki
DocSlendy chapter 1 . 3/18
Interesting, I like it!
NakedFury chapter 1 . 3/18
What fucking fun of a crossover
BW Lewis chapter 13 . 2/20
Awesome! I love it!

Good luck and update soon,
BlazeStryker chapter 13 . 2/18
He's taking up Peter Parker Prank-fu?

Ye gods..
Omega0117 chapter 13 . 2/13
when are the next chapters coming out?
Guest chapter 1 . 2/10
Do you think you can make a Naruto x fem itachi
mdhunter111 chapter 13 . 1/25
Awesome story so far! Please continue! Looking forward to the next chapter!
Jameslw chapter 13 . 1/10
great please continue
Guest chapter 1 . 1/5
Badass and just has that hellsing insane as a topping
thor94 chapter 13 . 12/16/2014
good chapter.
hope someone catch danzo and give him what he always deserved.
SonOfNenji chapter 5 . 12/12/2014
Ugh...

Why do you have to be so redundant?

Readers aren't stupid, and they aren't goldfish. You don't have to repeat yourself and spoon-feed us.

You're insulting our intelligence as well as your's by doing so.

-N
SonOfNenji chapter 4 . 12/12/2014
You're too blatant with your harem, and your girls and otherwise are too patient (and unsuspecting, no matter how transparent he acts).

Naruto is acting like Sasuke a lot of the time, if you didn't notice. Fix it.

Venom and Kyuubi don't get nearly enough screentime. Considering Venom was supposed to be the main attraction to this fiction, I feel sort of cheated now that you've gotten bored with him. (What's the point of making a crossover if everything foreign gets shafted?)

-N
GentlestCobra2 chapter 13 . 12/11/2014
great make more soon
SonOfNenji chapter 3 . 12/11/2014
Again, you at times you are being too heavy handed.

Ino is a clan hair.

You talked so lightly about making her a slave for breaking and entering.

You made everyone so accepting of it too, with smiles all around about her making the best choice. *eyeroll*

Decide already. Is this an action movie or a badly scripted porno?

Also, the more he becomes involved with other girls, the more it feels like he's playing Hinata.

That you don't even touch on that point only verifies it, it would seem.

You were also very heavy handed in how you handed The Reveal. ("Shame on you, he's rich!")

Overall, I feel general concepts are where your talent lies.

Your action scenes and ideas are great, and so is most of your story, but whenever a lot of words are involved you start to screw it up.

The bigger the "speech" the more ham is served.

Mostly, I tolerate it because of the other things you have to offer, but as I said previously: it's a black mark on it.

-N
SonOfNenji chapter 2 . 12/11/2014
Most of this is great, but the heavy handed and blatant bashing(as opposed to subtle) makes a black spot on your record.

-N
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