|Reviews for Captive|
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/27
Kara & Lee were not friends. May have been "friendly" but they were never friends. Also Lee was promoted to Commander if he is commanding the Pegasus in this story. He is NOT a Major
| Puppet Master chapter 1 . 2/27
so what was different here than canon in the end. Kara still a coward. Still selfish. still thinks her problems are what matters. she has no concern for what she did to Lee. Same old nonsense. If you were gonna go this way you should of had him slap her back (which is what Lee would have actually done) and then tell her exactly what he thought of her. (which is also what he would have done) The more Kara told him to go the more Lee would have "version" of Lee dont really work very well.
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/13
Wow this kind of Lee/Kara/Sam story has been done. To death. Lee should have told Kara the truth. That she is rotten inside and she would ruin it with sam up just like she ruined it with him. Should have told her what a cruel hateful piece of shit she was. That would be the truth. You have her smirking like its a joke.
Nobody in the real world would give a shit what happened to Kara on New Cap. Only a moron would go running back. Because in your story - it is only her detention & treatment that changed her mind. If it had not happened Kara would not have had a thing to do w/ lee.
How about a story where Lee gets to keep his balls. That would be orginal
| Lee got no balls chapter 13 . 12/5/2013
The problem with Lee has always been his lack of commitment, his constant failure to see things through. He says he will not give up on Kara and then does. Says he will not abandon her and then does. Says he will not let her go ...and then does. Kara throw out an vile,ugly, uncalled for insult by comparing him to Leoben. His reaction is completely understandable but again he is the one apologizing. His lack of spine is appalling
| ahrocks08 chapter 16 . 2/18/2013
Loved your story! I'm a sucker for a baby fic! Thanks for posting!
| izzabella11 chapter 16 . 3/7/2012
Love this fic, especially the epilogue :)
| Parzival vi Britannia chapter 16 . 6/13/2011
pretty good fic loved it.
| hmonster4 chapter 1 . 9/23/2010
the conversation/honest words between the two of them was so well done - and so spot on. I am very much looking forward to the next ch on this - as I love how you captured them and I am realizing just how much I miss these two.
| Kessi38 chapter 16 . 7/30/2009
i love the way that ended!
this story was wicked!
| Redd chapter 12 . 3/29/2009
Aww, so sweet! Kara's awake again. And I doubt anyone would be surprised if Rory's first word was no.
| Redd chapter 11 . 3/28/2009
But we all know that Kara has to get better...right? So much sweetness happening with the boys-Helo's always a trip.
| Redd chapter 10 . 3/28/2009
Oh, it was so sweet!
| Redd chapter 9 . 3/28/2009
This scene was so much better with Lee in it.
| Redd chapter 8 . 3/28/2009
Amazing, as usual. But damn creepy.
| Redd chapter 7 . 3/28/2009
Oh thank god for Sharon, really. THis was awesome. Kara's so fantastic.
Kara calling the baby Nugget was a great touch.