Reviews for Destines Entwined
Ultimate10 chapter 1 . 8/17/2016
Not a bad start. Although I noticed a plot hole. Jacob said there house was a couple miles away. The sphere was in Central Park & Helen works at Princeton. They should live much further from New York than a couple miles
Idyllicdream chapter 6 . 8/17/2015
This is an absolutely amazing story! The way you wrote it made me swoon XD, just kidding. But your writing truly captured the characters’ personality: Klaatu’s gentle and surreal nature, Helen’s love and caringness and Jacob’s child-like antics. When I read what you wrote, it genuinely feels as if I’m seeing the characters narrating. It’s awesome and I love it! I hope we’ll get to see part VII really soon.
jesspider chapter 6 . 11/11/2013
oh nooo! x2... cliffhanger and no chapters... i can only assume you had a good reason for not updating since 2009..:( I hope one day you may come back to it..
jessspider chapter 5 . 11/11/2013
heheheheee...loved it...
Jessspider chapter 4 . 11/11/2013
I love how you captured Klaatu's character in this chapter. In fact I thought it was a pretty great chapter. He is after all an alien in a human body, still trying to be accustomed to the variety of human behaviors and such... excellent stuff...
jessspider chapter 3 . 11/11/2013
Very cute chapter. Love how Klaatu is exploring his human feelings - and how Helen can't help herself! Well written, very exciting, love how you're drawing us into this...I see there are three chapters remaining... I would like to say now, that if it hasn't already, it needs to be updated and another chapter needs to be added!
Jessspider chapter 2 . 11/11/2013
Love the fluff! Love this chapter! Can't wait to read on. I really like that she thanked him at the end there...
Jessspider chapter 1 . 11/11/2013
Ooo! Great beginning chapter...:) can't wait to see what happens next...
MalikaiDragonSlayer chapter 6 . 12/14/2012
None of the good the day the earth stood still stories have been updated in years. Please, please, please update. I really hoe you can and do.
rEdRoSeSiNaUgUsT chapter 6 . 4/10/2012
Dude, you gotta update asap! I love where you're going with this :D
Genius-626 chapter 5 . 3/30/2012
Thomas Anderson? I detect a Matrix fan, or is this just a coincidence ;) nice story, btw. I like it so far and wish I knew how it ended
DWF chapter 6 . 9/21/2011
Please, please, please update this! I absolutely love it!
SavitarTheSurfingGod chapter 2 . 9/2/2011
Hmmm good but there was a huge plot hole the emp burst would have fried his video games since they wouldn't be protected from that.
FYInichole chapter 6 . 8/1/2011
Please update very soon! Just saw the movie last night on FX , truly amazing :)
NorseSiren chapter 6 . 7/6/2011
i am new to this fandom..and i love it! :D i hope you update soon,i see its been over a year now... :(
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