|Reviews for Heart's Home|
| Dayjor chapter 3 . 1/22
Really like this story, but two suggestions. First, add Hermione to the character list; second, I'm a little confused about the insistence that Harry and Luna must go back to England, so maybe explain that a little better.
| bleeb90 chapter 5 . 1/4
The first two chapters left me feeling all fuzzy and warm inside. And the last three made me marvel about the positivity you managed to put into your story. What an amazing read!
| discb chapter 5 . 12/24/2013
It's 4:19 am when I write this so I'm bound be be a bit more out there with this.
First off, fuck you for writing the most bittersweet lunar harmony I've ever read. Fucking christ I've got more "dem feels" right now then some of the darker moments in my real life.
On the other hand, thanks for posting this. It's a beautiful story going places where most won't tread and blended beautifully at a level that most craftsmen could never reach.
| at-nightfall chapter 4 . 10/21/2013
some story problems:
you are projecting an US style medical system on a British based society. Using an UK style medical system, the Weasleys initial medical treatments should be covered by insurance, so Ron shouldn't lose his arm.
The long term care for Ginny and the bills for legal representation would still bankrupt the Weasleys.
Hermiones parents should have been busted as frauds in Australia early on. They might be trained and experienced dentists, but the paperwork is not there. They could carry certificates, but any background check would expose them as frauds. They would also lose their accreditation with medical insurance.
The cost of moving a dental surgery would be prohibitive Hermiones parents. They could be employed by various dental surgeries one after another, which would make locating them even more difficult. Thus only the last dental surgery might be their own.
If Hermiones parents again operate their own dental surgery in Australia, moving back to the UK is not only a financial problem, but:
- how bad did Hermione burn her parents bridges in the UK? Could they get their accreditation with medical insurance back? Could they ever operate a dentistry in London again?
- would their personal medical ethics allow them to abandon their patients? It might be acceptable for them to sell their dental surgery to an empoyee or a co- worker.
| akj chapter 3 . 10/3/2013
This is a great story. Also, I believe this is the first one I have read that actually deals with some of the consequences of Hermione erasing her parents' memories.
| AliB1149 chapter 5 . 9/5/2013
Lovely, simply lovely. I love the equality and the fact that Adelaide plays a role is special because it is my family hometown. My dad used to live in Modbury. :)
| SnuggleKitten69 chapter 4 . 8/31/2013
Another quietly excellent chapter. The writing is rich with imagery that fills the mind, allowing it to wander through a three-dimensional view of the characters, often in a kaleidoscope of colours up colours.
The relationship building and rebuilding is believable and maintains a deep sense of reality.
| SnuggleKitten69 chapter 3 . 8/31/2013
Many non-native speakers do not realise there are familiar and formal modes of speech and French. "Vous" and "tu" is but one example.
Another exquisite chapter, mon ami.
| SnuggleKitten69 chapter 2 . 8/31/2013
I fell asleep shortly after leaving my previous review.
I very much enjoyed reading this continuation of the story. The story is captivating, well-written, and engaging. I cannot wait to find out about Luna's and Hermione's day together!
| SnuggleKitten69 chapter 1 . 8/31/2013
Sleep eludes me yet again, and yet again I find myself reading a familiar story worth the time to read repeatedly.
This is a wonderful tale of love, sorrow, happiness, despair, and all the myriad emotions in between.
I implore you, dear reader, to take the time to read the wonderfully-crafted, emotionally-evocative story of loss, love, and Luna.
| Rake1810 chapter 5 . 5/29/2013
Great story! Loved the whole thing but my only complaint would have to be what i felt was a very abrupt ending.
| kildar2010 chapter 5 . 5/5/2013
A joy to read, i liked how you created a "soul bond" with out making it unrealistic.
9/10 (i like action to much for it to be a 10/10)
| studyofchaos chapter 5 . 4/27/2013
Amazing story. Loved it.
| LWJ2 chapter 5 . 4/11/2013
Excellent, sir. Thank you very much for this story and for sharing it.
Paladeus pointed me to your story, when you correspond with him, please give him my thanks.
| whitebuffalowmn chapter 5 . 3/13/2013
What an awesome moving story! It really touched my heart.
Thank you and kudos!