| Reviews for Heart's Home |
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   gand982 chapter 5 . 5/22/2010 Great story, great ending. Thanks for sharing |
| ILoveGeorgeEads chapter 5 . 5/22/2010 i loved was wonderful. |
| fantasyra chapter 5 . 5/22/2010 Just wonderful, fantastic. Thanks for writing a great story, I truly enjoyed reading it. |
| red-jacobson chapter 5 . 5/22/2010 Hi; thanks for the wrap up to the story, but I will admit that this chapter didn't seem to flow as well as the prior chapters. The scene breaks were kind of jarring, and, in my opinion, could have benefited from more bridging materials. Specifically the "Ouch" portion seemed to come from nowhere, and it really wasn't made clear what Harry was experiencing, was it physical, i.e. did he start to bruise, or get scratches on his face? or was it strictly emotional, and, if so, why did Evan and Robyn react like Harry looked like he had been run over by a truck? red |
| Amber611 chapter 4 . 5/20/2010 Amazing fic, I LOVE it! You've done a Beautiful job with Harry, Hermione and Luna! :) Sweet, Funny, Sad, Romantic, just Wonderful! I definitely Can't Wait to read more, so please keep up the Awesome work! :) Thanks for sharing! Take Care, Amber :) |
| Herne-of-the-lantern chapter 1 . 5/18/2010 I like it. Please updat soon. |
| Tribernator chapter 4 . 5/18/2010 I hope you do finish this story soon, as it is quite excellent. Its a nice change of pace from reading the reiteration of canon events with one or two changes in personality. |
| David M. Potter chapter 4 . 5/3/2010 This has become my favorite book! Please continue it and don't stop! May the muse be with you! |
| David M. Potter chapter 3 . 5/3/2010 WOQ... Just Wow! |
| David M. Potter chapter 2 . 5/3/2010 THIS AN AWESOME STORY! I love it! Thank you for sharing it with us. |
| David M. Potter chapter 1 . 5/2/2010 Great start! Awesome... |
| Scabbers1957 chapter 4 . 4/30/2010 While I'm not big on multi relationships..this was very well & tastefully done. I really like how Luna is being healed from all her trama & all three are learning how to deal with with their own faults & issues. I have a feeling this will be a well done story in the end. I'll add you & it to my alerts. :) |
| Dave.New chapter 4 . 4/26/2010 Heya, just fiished reading up on your story, and I've enjoyed it so far. Its nice to see reasons behind Luna's strangeness, so many atribute it to things like being part seer, or something else like that. But the Hearts Home does seem like a more solid baring for someone like Luna. Anyway, I hope you do manage to write some more of this story, or even make a second part to it. I've enjoyed it! |
| SFD chapter 4 . 4/14/2010 This is truly beautiful. A lot of writers, lots of "real" writers too, try to be poetic, managing only tacky and corny - Not you. Thanks! niv |
| TxA-GunFighter chapter 4 . 4/6/2010 Very good chapter. Can't wait to read more. gunny |