Reviews for Lesson for Paul
Guest chapter 2 . 6/23
I like the indications of the dawn liking Paul and ash
Liking misty thing, it's intriguing and makes the readers want to continue reading to see who gets with who in the end
natasha chapter 14 . 8/5/2014
That was cool I guess but not raelly yje end no afens I 3 paul his cool and cute I make fanfuction to lol but this is one of my favs
animeloveryugioh chapter 14 . 7/25/2014
I love your stories and this one is my favorite
Wilson-Taito-KoganLoverForever chapter 14 . 6/17/2014
I loved it! Make a sequel. o.o
Caird56 chapter 14 . 5/28/2014
make a sequel and i will tell everyone i know about this i love it soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo freaken much
Caird56 chapter 10 . 5/28/2014
OMG PAUL CRYING btw how i work for reviews i only review in the middle of the story if i want to say something like well what i just said because i do my final review at the end kk
animelover2day1990 chapter 14 . 2/28/2014
LOL I can't believe I wrote this shit! I'm embarrassed, I wish I could delete this abomination! ;_; I love this couple so much, why couldn't I have wrote something amazing for these two. I mean nothing remotely made any sense in this story. What lesson was Ash trying to teach Paul, did he learn anything... He is still a complete ass and yay for random sex for the final chapter. *rolls eyes* The characters were badly written. Just everything was badly written, horrible, horrible! DX I hate this story and all you should too! My god, I have such great taste in fanfiction, you would think I wouldn't write such garbage, but as you can see, this exists. I can not undo what has been done. :(
Tsundere Jiuweihu Kitsune chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
Ehh...
Juan chapter 14 . 7/29/2013
Abs
zora-chan chapter 14 . 7/25/2013
I LOVE IT! !
shadilver1-2-3 chapter 13 . 5/28/2013
AAAAAArg como coña me cagan la puta vida! todos son iguales siempre se me tienen que cagar las historias pero no! hay van con las estupidasviejas arg yaoi algún día seras completamente yaoi? TnT
shadilver1-2-3 chapter 10 . 5/28/2013
waaaa pero paul no era así ya me lo cambiaste u.u al principio me emocione por misty pero creo que ash se enfoco demasiado en ella -.- bueno es que odia a ese tipo de parejas obvio menos el pokeshipping si estuvo bien pero no era tanto jajajaa yo critico a ellos no a ti ya que tu eres como un dios jajajajaja
shadilver1-2-3 chapter 8 . 5/28/2013
yo lo único que se es que me fascina tu historia pero sigo odiando a dawn y a ese pikachu feo xDDD
shadilver1-2-3 chapter 7 . 5/28/2013
aaaaaaaaaaaa a la verga con dawn ya me cagaron la historia u.u
shadilver1-2-3 chapter 5 . 5/28/2013
odio a Dawn *3* aaaaa amo tu historia esta muy genial gracias por todo me animaste el día : D sigues así! n.n
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