Reviews for Lost Moon
xanafax chapter 25 . 8/13/2015
This is amazing you have a talent. You described everyone perfectly. Good job!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/14/2014
The name of this story is very clever. In playing with the original title but making it so it suited Edward was the reason I chose to read this story.
debann23 chapter 28 . 5/8/2014
thank you uptonogoodj5 for sharing your talent with us mundanes.
you kept true to ms myers Edward...the guilt he fills & not show Bella
thank you
deb
debann23 chapter 21 . 5/7/2014
great job
deb
debann23 chapter 20 . 5/6/2014
I need to read the next chapter...the sleep talking!
deb
debann23 chapter 19 . 5/6/2014
Have you thought of doing eclipse & breaking dawn
you would do them justice also...
deb
debann23 chapter 18 . 5/6/2014
Again great job
its 00:25 hrs & I have 10 chapters to go
an all nighter maybe
deb
debann23 chapter 17 . 5/6/2014
Great, to hear Edwards thoughts in voltera...I can't put down & its getting early
deb
debann23 chapter 16 . 5/6/2014
I do hope you continued...
great
deb
debann23 chapter 15 . 5/6/2014
I like the more information between Alice & Edward
deb
debann23 chapter 14 . 5/6/2014
I know o keep repeating myself but great job, the way he is fighting to die, but still keep from disappointing his father figure is heart reaching. you pain with style MOTO being overly zappy...
deb
debann23 chapter 13 . 5/6/2014
OMD OMD OMD I had to stop reading & calm down I was crying so hard.
deb
debann23 chapter 12 . 5/6/2014
Loved it
debann23 chapter 11 . 5/6/2014
Great job
deb
debann23 chapter 9 . 5/6/2014
I'm still on chap 9 I have not finished but enter to ask you
1. Di you someday incorporated Bella hearing Edward when she was reckless. O saw an interview w Ms. Myers about it & she said maybe esp? When Edward was thinking of Bella with out realizing it could be the times she heard him?
and/or
scholarship that Ms. Myers took out.
you are doing or did a great job
deb.
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