Reviews for Fly Away
heygodcomplex chapter 1 . 9/23/2010
Interesting take on Patrick. Wonderful use of repetition. I liked this quite a bit.
Stellarsong chapter 1 . 6/17/2010
That's so sweet, I love how you put that memory in there and then the last moments of Patrick's life. It's short but the combination of current events and memory and the repetition of that phrase really makes for a good oneshot. Well written.

Stellarsong
Aredhel Rien Atrail chapter 1 . 4/4/2009
Aww, so sweet. Nice job.
Ms. Kreatopita chapter 1 . 3/16/2009
*bawls uncontrollably*

Quite an unusual take on Patrick's character, but it's so sweet! ;_;

R.I.P. Patrick.
SasukeBlade chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
You kill me, you really do. The repetition of fly away was good. Loved the childhood memory, and how it all came down to being the person his father told him to be in the end. Great.
Hakeber.N chapter 1 . 1/8/2009
b-b-b-b-but. . .it's too short!

No, really, uhm, it was awesome. I guess I'm just more used to reading long drabbles from you. Thanks anyway!