Reviews for Reflections in Twilight |
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![]() ![]() Wow. I liked it, felt it was pretty close to canon, but darker and more pessimistic with the inner, true feelings of Naruto had he no light or given a chance to live for himself and be acknowledged for himself and not to be seen as evil or worthless. I would love more of this , especially since I don't believe the question asked in the summary of what Naruto did wasn't answered. If it was, then dang it cuz I obviously missed it. Regardless, I enjoyed reading how things could have been if made to be kept twisted, dark, and unfair. Thank you for writing and sharing this! Take care and have fun! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not bad, what age was he when he thought about such things? the time skips and the alleged training trip? what caused it? overall if you add a moment breaking moment during the training trip together with a few flashbacks and then this it could fit nicely into canon |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's intriguing and has huge potential. I can't wait for you to continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue this fic. There are very few actually good fics which show Naruto finally giving up on Konoha. So please continue this fic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Do continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting! This is unique in it of itself. It shows anger and regret flawlessly. It's only the first chapter but I am already hooked! Keep going! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes! A disillusioned Naruto story, instead of the whole 'becomes super to drag Sasuke's pansy ass back to Konoha, only to get freakin' killed for trying' stories! Continue, please? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Rather pretty. It's nice as a oneshot, but I'm curious as to which direction it'll go in if you continue... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked the prologue and i hope you update uo the good work |
![]() ![]() ![]() The story so far was one of my favorates and its only been one chapter. If you continue i will read it all as you have a lot of talent as a writer |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh I so fucking want to see more of this it hurts. This is fantastic and it make me almost crack up and cry at the same time. You better update or I may have to be very upset. Very upset. So update, okay? |
![]() ![]() ![]() as long as you don't have a harem or the "i'm an uchiha, train me." i'm all for you continuing. Naruto, vengeance. they just mesh well. XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() it would be awsome if you did this as a story |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting :) pondering how this would continue though as the fics only naruto's thoughts at the moment |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is defanitly a story you should continue, as it is an interesting take on an admittedly old idea. |