Wow. I liked it, felt it was pretty close to canon, but darker and more pessimistic with the inner, true feelings of Naruto had he no light or given a chance to live for himself and be acknowledged for himself and not to be seen as evil or worthless.
I would love more of this , especially since I don't believe the question asked in the summary of what Naruto did wasn't answered. If it was, then dang it cuz I obviously missed it. Regardless, I enjoyed reading how things could have been if made to be kept twisted, dark, and unfair.
Thank you for writing and sharing this!
Take care and have fun!

Not bad, what age was he when he thought about such things? the time skips and the alleged training trip? what caused it? overall if you add a moment breaking moment during the training trip together with a few flashbacks and then this it could fit nicely into canon

It's intriguing and has huge potential. I can't wait for you to continue!

Please continue this fic. There are very few actually good fics which show Naruto finally giving up on Konoha. So please continue this fic.

Do continue

interesting! This is unique in it of itself. It shows anger and regret flawlessly. It's only the first chapter but I am already hooked! Keep going!

Yes! A disillusioned Naruto story, instead of the whole 'becomes super to drag Sasuke's pansy ass back to Konoha, only to get freakin' killed for trying' stories! Continue, please?

Rather pretty. It's nice as a oneshot, but I'm curious as to which direction it'll go in if you continue...

I really liked the prologue and

i hope you update uo the good work

The story so far was one of my favorates and its only been one chapter. If you continue i will read it all as you have a lot of talent as a writer

Oh I so fucking want to see more of this it hurts. This is fantastic and it make me almost crack up and cry at the same time. You better update or I may have to be very upset. Very upset. So update, okay?

as long as you don't have a harem or the "i'm an uchiha, train me." i'm all for you continuing. Naruto, vengeance. they just mesh well. XD

it would be awsome if you did this as a story

interesting :) pondering how this would continue though as the fics only naruto's thoughts at the moment

This is defanitly a story you should continue, as it is an interesting take on an admittedly old idea.