Reviews for With the Dawning Day
Yukiie chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
you killed off Rangiku? NOOOOOO
The Puppeteer chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
Oh, Rangiku died. Man. I was wondering if Nanao would name her daughter Rangiku.
multifarious chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
I love your stories, so the only feed back I have is for typos.

"She lit a small lap"

I think you meant: "she lit a small lamp"
WinterVines chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
Wow I am so behind in reading updates. It's bad. This one is good though. Something short and sweet before I have to go to class. It's sad about Rangiku, but I love how you put Gin in there as a result. That was just too awesome. It would be cool if that really happened, but I doubt it. It'd be nice if they were alive too. Anyway, thanks for sharing. -KG
Skolli chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
That was just amazing! I loved it. You put so much emotion into the story. I loved the little things like Nanao tucking Shunsui back in, or Shunsui just putting his hands on Nanao's belly, over their child. Just beautiful!
darkangel1910 chapter 1 . 1/1/2009
This was a lovely continuation of your previous fanfic. New year, a new life with new opportunities is just the thing for them to get over their losses.
ToastWeaselofDOOM chapter 1 . 1/1/2009
News huh? *smirks* I wonder what that could be?

These two are so great together. It was very well written, and I don't think I spotted any mistakes. Happy New year!