Reviews for Deceptively Smooth
kurage-hime-chan chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
OMG LOL .
Maxeyn chapter 1 . 12/11/2010
LMAO.! Love this.! Its so cute.!
melahun chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
Lurvz, lurvz, lurvz I love the plot! And the ending was so funny! XD
oReTA aWaI tsUbAsa chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
Priceless ending ;D
brat-a-chat chapter 1 . 4/12/2010
ahahahahaha i love this the end was good "Chocolate?" lol it was so good. i love this manga!
I.AM.NOT.A.DOG chapter 1 . 3/14/2010
LOL how ever did they end up in a situation like that? but no matter it still rocked! *adds to favourites CLICKY!*
Vicious-Fluffy-Bunny-Llama chapter 1 . 3/5/2010
Ha ha ha. That's funny
SalomSoul chapter 1 . 10/19/2009
my,my! how scandalous! cute 3
KakeruTamaki chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
HILARIOUS! Best oneshot I'ver read so far! Nice one! heheh...Im still laughing at the end...heheh...'Chocolate?'
Inukomu334 chapter 1 . 10/10/2009
Oh, it starts out a bit much, by my standards, but the ending... lol... no, that's beyond lol... that was hilarious!
AbsoluteAddiction-x chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
Lol xD!

Great one-shot, well done ;D
Chia Chia Rei chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
yay! So funny.
Cha-Cha-Cheesecake chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
This made me lol x

XD
Shuichi Saito chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
So cute! i could imagine that happening in the manga!

And when Glen and Yue came up, god that was funny!

shame...there are a serious lack of 'Magical X Miracle'

fanfics on here and i definatly love yours.

From...

Aquamarine-Sea XD
Crazy anime chick since 1993 chapter 1 . 5/4/2009
Oh wow. I like the part with Vaith holding up the box of chovolate. It's adorable. -
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