Reviews for Two Paths Intersected
Ana568 chapter 14 . 11/29/2009
'kay.
likethestarsthat-shine chapter 14 . 11/28/2009
Aw. I love this sotry. ESPECIALLY chapter 12. *grins a toothy grin* haha. anyways, take a breather. I know I always need one. ALWAYS. Nobodys rushing you. You need a good break, after all thats been going on. And, anybody who DOES try rushing ya, tell me, and ill kick there ass. xD

Just, DO update, k? that's all i ask, is that sometime within this century, while im still alive, you update, k? dont care if im 99 when this finally updates, just plz do. kk, well. . .this was a long review. . .ok bye now
devil96 chapter 12 . 11/22/2009
Great story! I wish I could get as many reviews as you and I hope that you update very soon! You make this story so realastic even though I don't really like it when supernatural craetures are made into humans, but this story is different and refreshing so with all due respect if you ever need any help feel free to ask! People giving you problems, tell them that they need to get a life and if that isn't enough then tell them to take it up with me! ) Love your story and good luck!
kenziemorton chapter 7 . 11/21/2009
love it
twilightsun01 chapter 13 . 10/10/2009
WOW! That's like, exactly my problem too, girl. Don't worry. Not many huge family blowouts or sickness...but the tests...guys...ugh! I know how ya feel!
Shyrazie chapter 13 . 10/10/2009
its ok...most r having trouble too becuz of skool and etc.. }-
R.K. Cloud chapter 12 . 9/26/2009
Nice chapter! I liked that little moment at the end there. Very sweet.

Can't wait to read more :)

-Rebecca
SkySong92 chapter 12 . 9/15/2009
You did some good work on this one, it's much better. I like how you changed the ending, it's sweet. :) (It could still do with a bit of proofreading for spelling/grammar, but all over, good chapter!)

:D

If you want to send me the next chapter, I can take it anytime :)
Knit Bug chapter 12 . 9/15/2009
Yay! A kiss. Finally a kiss. Woohoo. Thanks for the update.
Luvntwilight chapter 12 . 9/14/2009
That was an awesome update. I love B&E moments as well.
Shyrazie chapter 12 . 9/13/2009
it is a kewl beans chapter! does ethan wake up from his nap and he finds his mom making out with edward? }-
twilightsun01 chapter 12 . 9/13/2009
Oh. My. Gosh. You can't just leave us with a cliffie like that! Okay, she kissed him? What the hell? I need to know what's going to happen...argh! I love writing cliffhangers but I HATE reading them! AH!
Ana568 chapter 12 . 9/13/2009
umm...wow that's ...awesome?
CountryBoy419 chapter 11 . 8/14/2009
Finally! Gosh, its about time they went out and Ethan woke up! Not sure if you noticed, but the part where they're talking in the cafe and Edward talks about the waitress not taking Bellas order until he told her to and then the quote ends and you started a new one and it said, “Why’d you accept my offer to lunch?” and wasn't that Edward talking? So it was like Edward talks and then Edward talks again. Anyways, loved the chapter,

bye!

Alice
CountryBoy419 chapter 10 . 8/14/2009
I'm glad Esme made her feel better. And poor Ethan. I'm still worried and its still sad. Well I have nothing else to say, so...

bye!

Alice
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