|Reviews for A Better Man|
| Lothlorien Aeterna chapter 3 . 6/10/2011
I loved it. You are such a great writer :)
| morallygreydesi chapter 3 . 4/5/2010
Wow...That's a beautiful story...I love it so so so much..
| Sky-Angel14 chapter 3 . 2/27/2010
| Eminnis chapter 3 . 1/10/2010
Sweet story! Keep up the good work!
Eminnis and Alicia
| Team Rosalie chapter 3 . 11/27/2009
i ttly luv it! it waz ttly carlisle w/ wat he did!
| ghpcommie chapter 3 . 7/16/2009
Very sweet. Loved the last line.
| chanson pour l'hiver chapter 3 . 4/15/2009
I loved it
| Carlysaurus chapter 3 . 1/14/2009
Aww, this is a great story. :]
...I still say he should've killed Charles anyway xD
| kkairi325 chapter 3 . 1/13/2009
Aww, that was AWESOME! Tho he should of been killed! lol.
| edwardplusbella620 chapter 3 . 1/13/2009
W O W ! that was amazing and im serious. that was one of the best pieces of anything ive ever read. espeically the last part where carlisle is contemplating his life so far. and the last line. oh my is so good. i just loved it. i hope you keep writing.
| findthewill chapter 2 . 1/13/2009
So perfectly Carlisle - making Charles see himself and realize Carlisle would kill him for his actions, but then having Carlisle walk away.
| massrie chapter 3 . 1/13/2009
Absolutely exquisite! You have painted Carlisle with a brush that had his name on it. You've really outdone yourself. I love this story Immensely. Carlisle is one of my favorite characters because of his passion, his COMpassion and his ability to just let things roll. You have become one of my favorite authors in just 3 chapters because I love the way you write.
I hope to see more from you in the future. Again Well Done.
| edwardplusbella620 chapter 2 . 1/11/2009
oh its good! continue please. )
| JL in Boots chapter 2 . 1/8/2009
This is very nicely written and I love how you have kept Carlisle the same and not giving into temptation. I can't wait to read more.
| Meagan chapter 2 . 1/8/2009
MY GOSH! tHAT WAS fAB! I LOVED IT! WRITE MORE!1