|Reviews for You have to be very careful what you wish for|
| Neshomeleh chapter 5 . 10/8/2012
It was a really nice story, but I'm not sure about one thing... Bobby and John met during their hunts, but when Dean was four and his Mom was still alive, John wasn't hunting - so Bobby and Dean wouldn't have known back then, right? I know, it's just a story - and a really good one - but you know how it is, you sometimes read or see certain things that just bother you - anyway, thank you for sharing!
| keeum chapter 5 . 8/16/2012
Awesome story. Thanks.
| Kokoroyume chapter 5 . 11/16/2011
Great story !
Thank you :)
| ccase13 chapter 1 . 10/7/2011
This is a nice story. Dean does need to meet a few good witches.
| Shawn989 chapter 3 . 2/10/2010
I Wish ta hell you worked for Kripke too! :)
| 6Darkest6Angel6 chapter 5 . 5/22/2009
i love this story, i've read it about 5 times now, but i never used to review but now i do so i thought i'd tell you this story is great. I love de-aged dean stories whether it's in mind or body or both.
| flamanipulator chapter 5 . 5/5/2009
This was a really good story. I think it's cool seeing that side of Dean, and you did a really good job creating it.
| nope nope not me chapter 3 . 3/3/2009
i think that's the cutest thing i have ever read. i feel sorta sorry for same though because it mustv'e been pretty awkard at some points ;)
| nope nope not me chapter 1 . 3/3/2009
! AW that is so cute! i love it. this was written really well. its awesome
| bhoney chapter 5 . 2/26/2009
Really interesting, the deal Castiel made to get Dean out of Hell, and of course that explains why Dean had to be fixed in three days-not because Castiel would throw him back into Hell, but because it would break the deal and the demons could suck him back down there.
Liked all the stuff with Belinda, and her looking in the guys' memories. What is the memory she pulled from Sam, of them in an abandoned building? Is it one from the show, or another fic of yours? There weren't enough specifics for me to pinpoint it.
I do really wish Dean would remember his time as a "child-man" so he could see what good care Sam took of him, and remember the enjoyment he got from the petting zoo, etc.
| bhoney chapter 4 . 2/26/2009
I really liked the saluting thing. It's a great idea, and a clever way to clean up after themselves so no one can get their DNA. Loved Dean's shaving experience, and the petting zoo, and his love for bunnies. LOL
You did a great job with the kidspeak in here. Dean really did sound like a kid his age would. Loved the "nonation".
And I loved this description of Dean: "You have this light inside you from when you were this small and it still burns bright even though you yourself have been surrounded by darkness, that light has never grown dim.”
| bhoney chapter 3 . 2/26/2009
This cracked me up: “But I’m growed UP!” Dean said emphatically. (Now to this day Sam swears that his brother actually whined but Dean categorically holds that it was a trick of the vocal cords, him being only four at the time and all.)
Great description: "...waitress with most of the mornings rush stained on her apron".
This was a lovely insight into Dean's character, and completely true: "For all the lethal danger his big brother could deal out to the evil that roamed around them he had an equal capacity for caring that he showed to those weaker, to those he would protect. And Sam found his throat tightening a little as his pride in his brother swelled his heart. Some things never change."
"Sam noted that the sign said ‘female’ flop ear and reasoned it was his brother’s karma to attract females of any species." LOL
This made me giggle, too: "I’ve yelled Dean look out it’s a Vampire and Dean, behind you, it’s a Werewolf but I never in all the weird shit we’ve experienced, ever thought I’d say these words, 'Dean, com’on your bubble bath is ready!'" *snort*
Loved how both Bobby and Sam keep getting choked up by little Dean. Really liked Sam's bedtime story for Dean, and his comment about knowing then Dean was a giant. *sniffle* I really love this open, affectionate, funny, adorable Dean. It's a little sad, to think of how he used to be, before the fire.
| bhoney chapter 2 . 2/26/2009
Aw, little Dean is sweet. Nice to see him having some happiness and innocence. Loved how easily he accepted everything and forgave Sam for changing him.
I LOVED this, it was so sweet: “Yup, he’s just a baby now, but he’s gonna be real cool and fun to play with an we’re gonna have lotz of ‘ventures!” Aw.
| gaelicspirit chapter 5 . 2/20/2009
“I can’t let you do that Belinda” Dean said to her mind. “You couldn’t take it, it would haunt you forever... might break you...and...I don’t want to be responsible for knocking you out of the healing game. Besides, I made a promise...”
There's my hero.
They’re not getting him, they had him once...they’re not getting him again. I know what to do.”
Interesting deal you have there between the angel and the demons...
“Hang in there Tiger, we’re gonna git cha back.”
Aww... the image of Bobby stroking Dean's head. *sniff* And I've always thought of Dean as a tiger - I like that the tiger was the lock.
Huh, did I go cougar trolling last night?
DUDE! *laugh* Okay, so you did say "loosely" based... but still! Cougar? *good natured frown at Meggin*
“Free will?” both brothers said at once.
Something almost like a smile eased onto the angels face as he explained, “It’s like God’s wild card, we can’t control it but we can point it in the most likely directions, the rest is up to you.”
Now THAT'S interesting.
Good job. :) Thanks for sharing.
| gaelicspirit chapter 4 . 2/20/2009
I’ll shave you ok?”
Aw... there was a time when I had to do that for my hubs, when he was really sick. It was one of those moments when you just feel, I don't know, the perfect level of give and take.
“Sam... You look...tired” smirked Bobby.
I feel his pain. ;)
You have this light inside you from when you were this small and it still burns bright even though you yourself have been surrounded by darkness, that light has never grown dim.”